I'm a new writer and I'm looking for some feedback

[quinnhemmingway]

Hello all. My name is Quinn Hemmingway, I'm a new
writer on the board. Bottom line.... I'm looking for
feedback on my work.

You can tell me it sucks, whatever. I just want to know
where I stand. Anyway, here are the names of pieces
and my addy. Peace...

"Concertina" (non-erotic)
"Miranda McMullen" (non-erotic)
"Caroline Rhea Goes To College" (Celebrity Fantasy)


quinnhemmingway@lycos.com

 

[MysteryWriter]

Love the name. if that muffin chick reads this I did send feedback but I did it my way lol....

Miss Hemingway you will find a bit of feedback from me. I do hope you understand why it is so sketchy. I tend to be easily influenced by things i read so I try not to get to engrossed in them.

 

[P. B. Walker]

if that muffin chick reads this I did send feedback but I did it my way lol....

"that muffin chick" <snickering>

I just got a vivid imagine of a man saying that, and before the word "chick" is out of his mouth, a female hand cracks across his cheek is a loud slap. LOL.

Thanks for the laugh MW

- PBW

 

[MysteryWriter]

You are most welcome I try to keep it light. Mostly because I am running with a crowd much smarter than me all I can do is be funny. That and hope you dont figure out that I am a fraud.