If you like it dark and creepy...

Varian P

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...my latest, Awake, has posted.

From one reader:

WOW! I...just stumbled upon this story in the top lists. This was the hottest story I've read in a long time! What'd I'd give for someone to take me like that! Man oh man!

But unless you're in the mood for abduction and forced sex, stay away.

This is a bit harsher than my usual fare; I'd love to hear people's reactions.

Thanks,

Varian
 
I thought this story was great! I mean, just about every female I know has had at least one dream about being raped or something similar and actually cumming. You know, being completely out of control or forced and enjoying it so much you cum. I think my favorite part was that she thought she was drunk enough to fuck her own ass! There was enough description to get me wet... most of the stories I read are about touching the woman, but about what the guy is feeling. I'm going to have to bookmark this story!
~ME
 
shy_999 said:
I thought this story was great! I mean, just about every female I know has had at least one dream about being raped or something similar and actually cumming. You know, being completely out of control or forced and enjoying it so much you cum. I think my favorite part was that she thought she was drunk enough to fuck her own ass! There was enough description to get me wet... most of the stories I read are about touching the woman, but about what the guy is feeling. I'm going to have to bookmark this story!
~ME

Shy,
Thanks so much for having a look, and for taking the time to post your comments.
I'm pleased you enjoyed it--I confess that even though this kind of story certainly gets my own erotic hot spots (which is no doubt obvious since I write them), I sometimes have qualms about posting them. That they bring people like you pleasure makes me feel good about writing and posting my naughty filth. :)
And I wouldn't have thought it possible, but your take on her hung-over speculation about what happened actually made me laugh. I love finding humor in dark places.
Thanks again for your sweet feedback!
-Varian
 
Varian P said:
...my latest, Awake, has posted.

But unless you're in the mood for abduction and forced sex, stay away.

This is a bit harsher than my usual fare; I'd love to hear people's reactions.

Thanks,

Varian

Now that was a thing of beauty, thank you.
 
i crave dark and creepy... that was beautiful Varian... done perfectly...

:kiss:
 
Recidiva and Redvixen,
Thanks to you both for taking me up on my invitation and reading my little story, and for petting my author's ego with such delicious praise.
-Varian
 
Varian P said:
Recidiva and Redvixen,
Thanks to you both for taking me up on my invitation and reading my little story, and for petting my author's ego with such delicious praise.
-Varian

I understand completely. It's all about the ego. I treat my little votes and comments page with the rapt attention I use when I played "The Sims"

Look! They like me!

Oh no, that one's dead.

We share some common sins. What the hell. Splurge.
 
Recidiva said:
I understand completely. It's all about the ego. I treat my little votes and comments page with the rapt attention I use when I played "The Sims"

Look! They like me!

Oh no, that one's dead.

We share some common sins. What the hell. Splurge.

I won't pretend for one single second that I don't love having my ego stroked and flattered--I could lap up compliments and generous votes until...well, I was going to extend that metaphor to some ridiculous length using lots of tongue imagery, but I'll let it go.

Much as I adore kind praise, though, I appreciate constructive criticism, too. Perhaps it's not so sustaining to the ego, but certainly helpful in learning to write a bit better!!

-Varian
 
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