If you like chess you might like this...

[p_p_man]

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=10989

This is my second attempt at getting some feedback.

So feel free folks...

 

[p_p_man]

I'm trying this for feedback for another couple of days

up...

 

[KillerMuffin]

You wrote that one? I had no idea.

 

[p_p_man]

KM...

Any comments on it?

 

[Sonia_de_Beaumanoir]

interesting

The premise was interesting, although I didn't see how the rules of chess were being followed.

My major complaint as to the editing was that some of the paragraphs are too long, making them difficult to read on the screen.

 

[KillerMuffin]

No, pp man, no comments on it. Other than it was an interesting premise.