Ideas from gunhilltrain

[jez24]

Let the wisdom below flow

 

[gunhilltrain]

https://www.literotica.com/s/you-couldnt-handle-me-ch-08

Series is incredible with its twists and buildups. Loved the fact that this was the longer at of all the chapters too, felt very detailed and laid out. Would love to see a reimagining in which Tanya succeeds and conquers Tom during their showdown as well as the aftermath of it, like this one detailed. A take of “Option 2” as opposed to “Option 1” as Tom detailed it from Chapter 7:
“There were three ways this ended. I fucked Mom, I OUT-fucked her, and then I walked away. This option would let me get this lust out of my system, and I go back to Carmen with that chapter in my life closed. Mom would be humbled and defeated, and since she got what she wanted, she would be done. She would be Mom again, hopefully.

Option two. I fucked Mom, and she out-fucked me. She'd fuck me into submission, making me crave her, turning me into a mindless, walking dick for her. In this case, I would be stolen from Carmen, reduced to my Mom's plaything. Obviously, this was the worst option. I would lose my soul-mate, be conquered by Mom, have my future taken from me by a twisted, ruthless seductress.”

You're obviously not TheTalkMan, who posted this chapter originally - in 2013. You're talking about what you might have done as an alterative ending, yet you haven't posted anything of your own yet. Well, get writing and show us what you can do.

P.S.: You posted almost exactly the same idea in August 2021. We know you like TheTalkMan's series; now create your own.

 

[gunhilltrain]

You're obviously not TheTalkMan, who posted this chapter originally - in 2013. You're talking about what you might have done as an alterative ending, yet you haven't posted anything of your own yet. Well, get writing and show us what you can do.

P.S.: You posted almost exactly the same idea in August 2021. We know you like TheTalkMan's series; now create your own.

Why did you change the thread title to have my user name in it? The title was something different yesterday; I would never put my user name in a thread title. I was giving you advice at best, not ideas.

 

[Carnevil9]

I thought only moderators could edit thread titles? This could be dangerous.

 

[gunhilltrain]

I thought only moderators could edit thread titles? This could be dangerous.

I never saw a thread title changed before, but then I rarely keep track of them. Could a moderator have done it? But why would they care about this thread?

 

[Carnevil9]

I never saw a thread title changed before, but then I rarely keep track of them. Could a moderator have done it? But why would they care about this thread?

I doubt a moderator did it. There doesn't seem to even be a moderator in this forum! And this is a pretty new message board software platform. They might not have set all the security settings where they belong yet. It is a pretty laissez-faire operation after all.

 

[gunhilltrain]

I doubt a moderator did it. There doesn't seem to even be a moderator in this forum! And this is a pretty new message board software platform. They might not have set all the security settings where they belong yet. It is a pretty laissez-faire operation after all.

All of the erotic literature sites I've seen (three of them) have software quirks. Actually, there is a fourth one that has such a strange submission process that I still haven't figured it out.