Idea, need feedback

[Dilvede]

I am considering putting into a story what my current living situation is where i am having an affair with a married woman and I am wondering what advice you guys would have about the way of approaching it, should i expend my vocabulary and make it highly elegant and versive, or make it slightly fluid and more fast moving with the facts, any advice would help for i want to make a true and great documentation of this affair for all to read and maybe engage in the same thing

 

[snooper]

I am considering putting into a story what my current living situation is where i am having an affair with a married woman and I am wondering what advice you guys would have about the way of approaching it, should i expend my vocabulary and make it highly elegant and versive, or make it slightly fluid and more fast moving with the facts, any advice would help for i want to make a true and great documentation of this affair for all to read and maybe engage in the same thing

How long do you want to allocate to learning better spelling and grammar than is shown in your posting? As to the story itself, how long do you want to spend writing it?

Those seem to be the two primary considerations, and nobody else can advise you on those.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

Re: Re: Idea, need feedback

How long do you want to allocate to learning better spelling and grammar than is shown in your posting? As to the story itself, how long do you want to spend writing it?

Those seem to be the two primary considerations, and nobody else can advise you on those.

Also very important (I think even more important) then grammar and spelling is punctuation. It is very hard to read without punctuation

 

[A7inchPhildo]

I like the story to be detailed but must flow with a certain amount of speed.

Need a build up but let me know the good details and not just the sex part

 

[greene14]

Nice idea

Hi Dilvede,

I like your story idea, let me have a copy when you're done please??

G14

 

[sirhugs]

I agree about spelling, etc. I don't worry too much in posts, but in stories they are essential.

I suggest in your first effort, you stay brief. 900 to 1200 words is nice. set the scene. one or two sex scenes
big ending