I know it's a bid weird and dirty, but I for a while fantacized about my dad having sex with other women other than my mom. I don't know why, maybe because I was attracted to those women and because I was still a boy I could only imagine my dad with them as a strong masculine role. So I was wondring if you like the idea of writing a story where a son and his dad together make love to a woman and it remains their secret or something. They would have no problem with that because it would be like "man understands man" thing. How about it huh? Have you read any stories like this?
Idea based on my wild fantasy
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I had this idea a while back for a daughter (which could easily be changed into a son) following a parent and discovering that they are having an affair.
What if the son blackmailed the parent's mistress into sleeping with him as well, and eventually the three all got together?
Chicklet
What if the son blackmailed the parent's mistress into sleeping with him as well, and eventually the three all got together?
Chicklet
This sounds good, but I like it when it's more spontaneous than not. If he blackmails her it's hot too, but how would 3 of them get together? if 3 of them get together, then what's the blackmail for? Maybe that lady is married? but that's just too complicated.
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Maybe both parents are teachers. Affairs between married teachers are pretty much frowned upon; the son, who could also be a student of the lady to give it a twist, says he'll tell the school board and then they'll both be fired. The woman doesn't want to lose her job and agrees, fucking him in the classroom and in the bathrooms and at her house etc.
How could the threesome come together?
The son has been blackmailing the woman for awhile and she hasn't really had time to see the father. He comes over while they're in the middle of sex, surprising the crap out of both of them. Dispite the boldness of the blackmailing, the son is still going to be ashamed and scared when he sees his father. Father gets really angry and approaches the boy like he's going to hit him, and the woman gets upset and throws herself on him, grabbing his arm and telling him not to hurt his son. Even though he's angry, having a naked woman hanging off of him is somewhat of a turn-on for the father. The woman notices his erection and to keep him from hurting his son starts to toy with him through his pants, talking to him calmly and trying to bring him out of it.
Yada yada yada they all screw.
Complicated? Yes, but I like long stories; they're better than the 750 word sex scenes I see all the time.
Chicklet
How could the threesome come together?
The son has been blackmailing the woman for awhile and she hasn't really had time to see the father. He comes over while they're in the middle of sex, surprising the crap out of both of them. Dispite the boldness of the blackmailing, the son is still going to be ashamed and scared when he sees his father. Father gets really angry and approaches the boy like he's going to hit him, and the woman gets upset and throws herself on him, grabbing his arm and telling him not to hurt his son. Even though he's angry, having a naked woman hanging off of him is somewhat of a turn-on for the father. The woman notices his erection and to keep him from hurting his son starts to toy with him through his pants, talking to him calmly and trying to bring him out of it.
Yada yada yada they all screw.
Complicated? Yes, but I like long stories; they're better than the 750 word sex scenes I see all the time.
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There's also the "18th birthday present" angle. The dad takes the son to a bordello and they share a woman. Their little secret/male bonding experience.
Edited to add...hmmm, maybe I'll write this version...I just need to get down the voice of a 18year old male virgin...hmmm
Edited to add...hmmm, maybe I'll write this version...I just need to get down the voice of a 18year old male virgin...hmmm
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deliciously_naughty said:
I'm thinking lines like: "Did too!" or "Cool, aight!"
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How about this story I wrote a year ago. I know I am not a professional writer, but I hope you like it, or if you don't like it, I am sorry if it may offend you.
I am 40 years old. I have a pleasant wife and a 13 year old son. It's not that I don't love my wife, I love her, and fuck her as much as she wants, but sometimes I just need to fuck someone else, if you see what I mean. Well, when this happened , it wasn't done on purpose or anything. It just happened. My wife, son and I live an apartment, but we also own a house not far from where we live. No one lives in that house, but we use it a storage space for various stuff. I also run a small store in the city. Well, I am always busy and I can't be the salesperson in that store. I am not crazy to stand there all day and sell candybars.
So, I needed to hire someone to be the salesperson. I thought it had to be a woman, because customers are always more likely to buy more produce if the there is a lady there. I knew just the right person to do the job. She was my old class mate. She wasn't my girlfriend or anything, I just knew her from school. Now she was 30 something, but still very sexy and attractive. I hired her and she was selling produce in my store for about a month. We had to have regular meetings when she would give me the money, an acount of what's been sold, what customers said, and what was going on in the store in general.
Our next meeting was agreed to be set at the house I described earlier. It was a hot and sunny Wednesday, and my son said he wanted to go too. I thought he would just play in the yard of the house while I get things done. We came to the house, and she was already waiting there. She was holding a white purse and wearing a short white skirt. It wasn't short like whores wear on the street, it was just above her knees. By the way, her name was Jessica. She was laughing as usual. She had short red hari, and was very tan. I know it sounds unusual for a red haired person to be tan, but that's how she was.
I don't know what was going on through her mind, but she acted as if I wasn't looking at her legs. I opened the door in the house. As usual my son slipped in first and ran to play in the yard, he had some toys there. Jessica walked in second, and I followed her. Her ass looked very firm and juicy, if you know what I mean. I couldn't move my eyes from her. We walked into a room where we would do the acounting.
There was a square table and two chairs. She sat half way accross, and I sat near her on another chair. We closed the door because my son was very nosy and would always run around. She immediately crossed her legs and we started to discuss the store, the customers, and how much money was earned. But throughout our discussion I could not move my eyes from her tanned sexy leggs she crossed in front of me. Of course, she's smart, and noticed it right away.
I forgot to mention, she didn't have a husband because she was divorced. She asked me "like my legs eh?" I looked at her, didn't say anything, just stretched my hand to touch her knee. I thought, what the hell, it's not like my wife in gonna find out, right? why not use this opportunity to fuck some redhead pussy? I am a man and I want variety. I saw that Jessica wanted to have sex too. She was very playful and was smiling. She asked me: "what? are you just gonna fuck me here, when your son is playing back there?" and laughed. I said "it's ok, since he's too young, he wont know anything".
I was stroking her leg and moving my hand lower under her skirt. I started to touch her pussy. Of course, it was very wet as it usually is with women who are about to get some cock. She unbuttoned her white blouse and I saw her big breasts covered by a bra. I gripped her panties from under her legs and pulled them hard. The came off very nicely. I told her to get on her knees because I wanted her to suck my cock.
She readily complied. I took off my pants and my briefs and my cock was in her mouth. Her mouth was full of saliva, which felt good against the skin of my penis. I was moving it back and forth as she sucked it in. I made sure my pubic hairs touched her face. It felt very good. It's like your dick is covered by a womans saliva, undescribable feeling. So I was fucking her mouth for a while as she moaned. The I heard my son screaming through the door "daaad!! are we going home soon!? I want to play more! Can I go to the neighbor's house? " to which I replied "yeah yeah, sure, you can go" Then I looked at Jessica's face as she could hardly hold from laughing. Then when she heard my son's footsteps in the distance she laughed and told me I was a big liar to lie to my son. I said I didn't like. " I want to fuck your pussy, lie on your back babe" I ordered her. She did.
I put a condom on my big dick then, just before inserting it into her wet pussy, I made her lick it so it would be wet. It's an unbeliable pleasure I felt when I felt the tip of my dick slide into her vagina. Oh man, I thought what if my wife and son saw this. But this felt so good. She started to moan like a whore. I moved my cock into her pussy up until the hairs of my balls touched her ass. Then I started to fuck her faster and faster. You could hear the sloppy sound of her my cock pounding her pussy. I fucked and fucked as hard as I could. Her legs were on my shoulders. Her breasts looked nice too. Very firm, just the right size. She wanted to tease me and began asking me how dirty I felt knowing that my wife is at home watchint TV as I fuck her pussy. I said " It feels good babe" and continued to fuck.
Then my strength was going away, and I felt I had to cum. Just at that moment, she screamed like I've never heard anyone scream before, it was a scream of pleasure! And bent her back as her muscles contracted. I knew she had an orgasm. I took my dick out of her pussy. I told her I was going to ejaculate on her pretty face and took the condom of my dick. She took it into her mouth once again, but it didn't last for long as I gave her a load of cum like she's never seen before! She almost started to cough and the white life-force was dripping from her mouth. "oh shit,you're so fucking great!" I praised her. She just laughed and kissed my dick again. We quickly dressed up.
We came out of the room and I told my son it was time to go. I asked him if he had a good time at the neighbors house, he said he did, but I thought, "no one could have had a better time than I did tonight" We went home and Jessica went to her home. I thought "I want to fuck this bitch again sometime"
I am 40 years old. I have a pleasant wife and a 13 year old son. It's not that I don't love my wife, I love her, and fuck her as much as she wants, but sometimes I just need to fuck someone else, if you see what I mean. Well, when this happened , it wasn't done on purpose or anything. It just happened. My wife, son and I live an apartment, but we also own a house not far from where we live. No one lives in that house, but we use it a storage space for various stuff. I also run a small store in the city. Well, I am always busy and I can't be the salesperson in that store. I am not crazy to stand there all day and sell candybars.
So, I needed to hire someone to be the salesperson. I thought it had to be a woman, because customers are always more likely to buy more produce if the there is a lady there. I knew just the right person to do the job. She was my old class mate. She wasn't my girlfriend or anything, I just knew her from school. Now she was 30 something, but still very sexy and attractive. I hired her and she was selling produce in my store for about a month. We had to have regular meetings when she would give me the money, an acount of what's been sold, what customers said, and what was going on in the store in general.
Our next meeting was agreed to be set at the house I described earlier. It was a hot and sunny Wednesday, and my son said he wanted to go too. I thought he would just play in the yard of the house while I get things done. We came to the house, and she was already waiting there. She was holding a white purse and wearing a short white skirt. It wasn't short like whores wear on the street, it was just above her knees. By the way, her name was Jessica. She was laughing as usual. She had short red hari, and was very tan. I know it sounds unusual for a red haired person to be tan, but that's how she was.
I don't know what was going on through her mind, but she acted as if I wasn't looking at her legs. I opened the door in the house. As usual my son slipped in first and ran to play in the yard, he had some toys there. Jessica walked in second, and I followed her. Her ass looked very firm and juicy, if you know what I mean. I couldn't move my eyes from her. We walked into a room where we would do the acounting.
There was a square table and two chairs. She sat half way accross, and I sat near her on another chair. We closed the door because my son was very nosy and would always run around. She immediately crossed her legs and we started to discuss the store, the customers, and how much money was earned. But throughout our discussion I could not move my eyes from her tanned sexy leggs she crossed in front of me. Of course, she's smart, and noticed it right away.
I forgot to mention, she didn't have a husband because she was divorced. She asked me "like my legs eh?" I looked at her, didn't say anything, just stretched my hand to touch her knee. I thought, what the hell, it's not like my wife in gonna find out, right? why not use this opportunity to fuck some redhead pussy? I am a man and I want variety. I saw that Jessica wanted to have sex too. She was very playful and was smiling. She asked me: "what? are you just gonna fuck me here, when your son is playing back there?" and laughed. I said "it's ok, since he's too young, he wont know anything".
I was stroking her leg and moving my hand lower under her skirt. I started to touch her pussy. Of course, it was very wet as it usually is with women who are about to get some cock. She unbuttoned her white blouse and I saw her big breasts covered by a bra. I gripped her panties from under her legs and pulled them hard. The came off very nicely. I told her to get on her knees because I wanted her to suck my cock.
She readily complied. I took off my pants and my briefs and my cock was in her mouth. Her mouth was full of saliva, which felt good against the skin of my penis. I was moving it back and forth as she sucked it in. I made sure my pubic hairs touched her face. It felt very good. It's like your dick is covered by a womans saliva, undescribable feeling. So I was fucking her mouth for a while as she moaned. The I heard my son screaming through the door "daaad!! are we going home soon!? I want to play more! Can I go to the neighbor's house? " to which I replied "yeah yeah, sure, you can go" Then I looked at Jessica's face as she could hardly hold from laughing. Then when she heard my son's footsteps in the distance she laughed and told me I was a big liar to lie to my son. I said I didn't like. " I want to fuck your pussy, lie on your back babe" I ordered her. She did.
I put a condom on my big dick then, just before inserting it into her wet pussy, I made her lick it so it would be wet. It's an unbeliable pleasure I felt when I felt the tip of my dick slide into her vagina. Oh man, I thought what if my wife and son saw this. But this felt so good. She started to moan like a whore. I moved my cock into her pussy up until the hairs of my balls touched her ass. Then I started to fuck her faster and faster. You could hear the sloppy sound of her my cock pounding her pussy. I fucked and fucked as hard as I could. Her legs were on my shoulders. Her breasts looked nice too. Very firm, just the right size. She wanted to tease me and began asking me how dirty I felt knowing that my wife is at home watchint TV as I fuck her pussy. I said " It feels good babe" and continued to fuck.
Then my strength was going away, and I felt I had to cum. Just at that moment, she screamed like I've never heard anyone scream before, it was a scream of pleasure! And bent her back as her muscles contracted. I knew she had an orgasm. I took my dick out of her pussy. I told her I was going to ejaculate on her pretty face and took the condom of my dick. She took it into her mouth once again, but it didn't last for long as I gave her a load of cum like she's never seen before! She almost started to cough and the white life-force was dripping from her mouth. "oh shit,you're so fucking great!" I praised her. She just laughed and kissed my dick again. We quickly dressed up.
We came out of the room and I told my son it was time to go. I asked him if he had a good time at the neighbors house, he said he did, but I thought, "no one could have had a better time than I did tonight" We went home and Jessica went to her home. I thought "I want to fuck this bitch again sometime"
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Chicklet said:
I used to hang out with a wild teen gang about 2 years ago... Some of the lingo stuck with me. You should have tried having a conversation with me back then!!!
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What about this - father catches his 19-year son with his 18-year girlfriend - the couple try to make love for the first time, but both are very unexpirienced and failed. Then the father helps his son to take the virginity of his girlfriend....
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MightyZor said:
The first thing to remember when writing a story is to make it readable. Paragraphs and grammar have a way of making a reader stumble through a story and regardless of how great the story is, it will get a big thumbs down.
I am not sure of the tone of your remark. You asked for feedback. You got it and seem to come across with an offended or sarcastic tone.
I would suggest that if you want feedback on a story, post it in the Story Feedback forum. People there are very gracious and willing to give good constructive criticism, but you have to be able to take it.
I am sorry if I have offended you by misreading the tone of your remark.
I would like to just remind you that this story is fiction.
I admit this story is not very good in terms of style, but I wrote it year ago when I didnt try hard to write and I just pasted it from another forum.
If I were to write a sequel I would write it from Jessica's point of view probably. She would be jealous that the dad is not fucking her anymore and stays with his wife and as a certain revenge she will try to have sex with the son (when he's older and looks like a man) Maybe she will secretely film their sex and then to bring pain to the father she will send him the tape? it's just an idea tell me how you like it.
I admit this story is not very good in terms of style, but I wrote it year ago when I didnt try hard to write and I just pasted it from another forum.
If I were to write a sequel I would write it from Jessica's point of view probably. She would be jealous that the dad is not fucking her anymore and stays with his wife and as a certain revenge she will try to have sex with the son (when he's older and looks like a man) Maybe she will secretely film their sex and then to bring pain to the father she will send him the tape? it's just an idea tell me how you like it.
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little advice
if you write in the first person tense, no matter how adamently you keep saying that the events did NOT happen to you, you will get a LOT of feedback about how "you" should do this - most of the time they are refering to your character, but other times they are not as clear.
One man told me in no uncertain terms that he would LOVE to suck my cock some time (I write in the male 1st person sometimes...) .... i was like... "thanks..."
Chicklet
MightyZor said:
if you write in the first person tense, no matter how adamently you keep saying that the events did NOT happen to you, you will get a LOT of feedback about how "you" should do this - most of the time they are refering to your character, but other times they are not as clear.
One man told me in no uncertain terms that he would LOVE to suck my cock some time (I write in the male 1st person sometimes...) .... i was like... "thanks..."
Chicklet
