I'd like to hear feedback

[Bubba Blues]

I'd like to hear feedback from anyone who has read my story, The Adventures of Bubba. This is a continuing work but I will not make a post that cannot stand on it's on. Comments would be appreciated. Thanks.

 

[Weird Harold]

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=9636

For those who are search challenged.

It's five pages, so be patient, it takes a while to read it.