I'd like some feedback, please.

rexfelis

Love the Shoulders
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Hi, guys and gals.

It's been a while since I posted here, except for stories and stuff, but I am interested in having some feedback on my writings.

I have done mostly non-erotic stuff.

I've been sort of analyzing my own stuff and trying to figure out what it needs in terms of improvement, and there are things I have been seeing, but I would appreciate hearing from someone else who is an experienced writer. Constructive criticism is always welcome.

My stories and poetry can all be accessed from my profiles page, which is:

http://literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=61507

Thanks for the help.

RexFelis
 
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