I wrote a poem. Read it

[SureYouCanWrite]

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=177881
I've been reading literotica for years now and this is my first ever submission. Too bad it was a poem.

You're welcome to critique and even ridicule it if you like - I'd just like someone to read it.

 

[WickedEve]

I read it. What is the purpose of these / / throughout the poem?

 

[WickedEve]

I like the parts where you go beyond the locations and actions of the cock. Like: "and grab the flesh just above your hips that you keep saying you hate even though I love that it's there."

 

[SureYouCanWrite]

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the / / are sort of to serve as italics
I wasn't sure if I should you HTML or what...

thanks for reading!

 

[Liar]

Re: //

the / / are sort of to serve as italics
I wasn't sure if I should you HTML or what...

thanks for reading!

For next time then: Yes, you can use <i> for italics and <b> for bold. The site allows those and some other tags, but not all HTML.

 

[SureYouCanWrite]

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Thanks Liar! Now I know.

I've been flipping through Eve's poetry. I like it a lot.

 

[Du Lac]

Welcome!

I found the style very interesting... an outright voice of what is wanted, desired, in a soft request... intimacy through clear cut blunt rhetoric.. nice mix..
welcome again!
du lac

 

[twelveoone]

I read it. What is the purpose of these / / throughout the poem?

/ = good angle

\ = bad angle

} = this one hurts

_ = Lorraine Bobbit was here



These /'s should have been obvious from the context of the poem

 

[WickedEve]

/ = good angle

\ = bad angle

} = this one hurts

_ = Lorraine Bobbit was here



These /'s should have been obvious from the context of the poem

ah...