I wrote a HOT new EROTIC poem - should I submit it?

[Dillinger]

You is my baby
oh yes you is
my baby doll is you
oh yeah

You is my baby, baby
oh yes, baby, you is
my baby doll, baby, is you
oh yeah, baby

You baby, is my baby, baby
oh baby, yes, baby, you is
my baby doll, baby, is you, baby
oh baby, yeah, baby

Baby you, baby, is my baby, baby
baby, oh baby, yes, baby, you is
baby, my baby doll, baby, is you, baby
baby, oh baby, yeah, baby

 

[bknight2602]

In a word, NO.

 

[Cerberus666]

Forget that dude, you should dubmit it to Bad Boy, puff Daddy (P-diddy, whatever) would love that shit. before you know it you will have your own video with lots of naked girls dancing around you. OHHH and you can have a posse. I want a posse, i need to write me one of them hot new peom thingies you got.

 

[Problem Child]

Forget that dude, you should dubmit it to Bad Boy, puff Daddy (P-diddy, whatever) would love that shit. before you know it you will have your own video with lots of naked girls dancing around you. OHHH and you can have a posse. I want a posse, i need to write me one of them hot new peom thingies you got.

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[lovetoread]

Oh yes baby baby...Submit it.

 

[Cerberus666]

hmmm. no i think not i rather like it here, nice atmosphere. Amusing suggestion though.

 

[Problem Child]

hmmm. no i think not i rather like it here, nice atmosphere. Amusing suggestion though.

Troublemaker.

 

[Cerberus666]

Ha, i try smarmy one. nice meeting you.

 

[Manhunter]

Hmmmmm gotta think about that one *N*

 

[Bindii]

Ummm about the poem.....can I print it out and read it when I'm masturba.....nevermind.....

 

[Guest]

You is my baby
oh yes you is
my baby doll is you
oh yeah

You is my baby, baby
oh yes, baby, you is
my baby doll, baby, is you
oh yeah, baby

You baby, is my baby, baby
oh baby, yes, baby, you is
my baby doll, baby, is you, baby
oh baby, yeah, baby

Baby you, baby, is my baby, baby
baby, oh baby, yes, baby, you is
baby, my baby doll, baby, is you, baby
baby, oh baby, yeah, baby

Nice angle, though. You could have spent a little more time to make it even 45.

 

[Astrid]

A Back Street Boy Band song, aaall the way.



Just change some of the 'baby's' to 'girl' and you've got a hit single on your hands.

 

[Dillinger]

I just knew you all would get off on it.

 

[Dillinger]

I'm feeling inspired again:

You Is My Baby - Part Deus - The Sequel


Oh baby baby baby
You is my baby
Yeah baby
Oh baby
You is

Baby baby baby
Oh baby
You is my babydoll, baby
Oh baby
Baby

Hey baby baby baby
Wow baby
Oh yeah baby oh yeah
Baby
You is my baby

 

[Linedrive]

Your skills are shinning through Dillinger...remember us little people when you make it big

 

[perks]

you forgot the "big american titties"

 

[brokenbrainwave]

hell sell it to Vanilla Ice. I hear he wants to make a comeback. Its right up his alley.

 

[Dillinger]

B
Ba
Bab
Baby
oh baby
Baby baby
oh baby baby
Baby baby baby
oh baby baby baby
Baby baby baby baby
oh baby baby baby baby
Baby baby baby baby baby
oh baby baby baby baby baby
Baby baby baby baby baby baby
oh baby baby baby baby baby baby
Baby baby baby baby baby baby baby
oh baby baby baby baby baby baby baby

 

[p_p_man]

You is my baby
oh yes you is
my baby doll is you
oh yeah

You is my baby, baby
oh yes, baby, you is
my baby doll, baby, is you
oh yeah, baby

You baby, is my baby, baby
oh baby, yes, baby, you is
my baby doll, baby, is you, baby
oh baby, yeah, baby

Baby you, baby, is my baby, baby
baby, oh baby, yes, baby, you is
baby, my baby doll, baby, is you, baby
baby, oh baby, yeah, baby

Oh Gawd!!!

ppman

 

[InnocentAngel81]

i think you need to add a few "girl" 's in that poem

 

[Dillinger]

i think you need to add a few "girl" 's in that poem

B girl
Ba girl
Bab girl
Baby girl
oh baby girl
Baby baby girl
oh baby baby girl
Baby baby baby girl
oh baby baby baby girl
Baby baby baby baby girl
oh baby baby baby baby girl
Baby baby baby baby baby girl
oh baby baby baby baby baby girl
Baby baby baby baby baby baby girl
oh baby baby baby baby baby baby girl
Baby baby baby baby baby baby baby girl
oh baby baby baby baby baby baby baby girl

 

[theGatsby]

I had a strange girl in Highschool sign my annual in a similar fashion . . . she stalked me for 2 years before becoming a lesbian while playing softball on scholarship in college. Thanks for the trip down memory lane.


edited to add that I actually found her to be much less strange after she discovered her true sexual identity.

 

[InnocentAngel81]

B girl
Ba girl
Bab girl
Baby girl
oh baby girl
Baby baby girl
oh baby baby girl
Baby baby baby girl
oh baby baby baby girl
Baby baby baby baby girl
oh baby baby baby baby girl
Baby baby baby baby baby girl
oh baby baby baby baby baby girl
Baby baby baby baby baby baby girl
oh baby baby baby baby baby baby girl
Baby baby baby baby baby baby baby girl
oh baby baby baby baby baby baby baby girl

woo hoo you took my advice it sounds a lot better

 

[Simply Me]

My God, is there no end to your talent?













One can hope.

 

[Guest]

Um, Dilly. You're no Paz, darlin.

Poor muse. Heh.