P Pedigree Virgin Joined Mar 15, 2001 Posts 1 Mar 18, 2001 #1 'My Sister's Panties' was my first story, I would really like some feedback from people who liked it, and some feedback on how I can improve for chapter 2.
'My Sister's Panties' was my first story, I would really like some feedback from people who liked it, and some feedback on how I can improve for chapter 2.
