I would love comments on my BDSM trilogy

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I have just completed the third chapter of my stories entitled:

A Story of My Slaves
Chapter 1: www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=15383
Chapter 2: www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=17392
Chapter 3: To be approved soon.

I would appreciate feedback, especially regarding specific parts you like and do not. Also I was hoping to get some help on the direction I could take. I already have a plan, but I'd like someone to back it up before I proceed. Your response, no matter how small or seemingly inconsequential, is greatly appreciated. Feel free to email me as well at anon_persona@hotmail.com
 
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