I would like someone to do a pre-reading for me

[rikaaim]

I hate to beg and sound like a tramp trying to seduce the would be reader, but I have a new poem I just scawled together in about three minutes. To me it's just feelings that don't amout to much, but I have many people suggest that I edit and polish my poems a bit before posting, so...

This is the first time I've asked someone to do a reading of a poem before I post it. Can I get a volunteer?

 

[ElizabethWest]

You can PM it to me if you like.

 

[rikaaim]

You can PM it to me if you like.

Thanks. I will.

 

[rikaaim]

You can PM it to me if you like.

That helped tremendously and I can see some room for improvement. Typos do occur when I just throw it together like that. I'm sorry for not catching them. Tonight is not a good night at any rate.

 

[ElizabethWest]

That helped tremendously and I can see some room for improvement. Typos do occur when I just throw it together like that. I'm sorry for not catching them. Tonight is not a good night at any rate.

That's what editors are for, right CS?

When they show up for work...

 

[angelicminx]

I hate to beg and sound like a tramp trying to seduce the would be reader, but I have a new poem I just scawled together in about three minutes. To me it's just feelings that don't amout to much, but I have many people suggest that I edit and polish my poems a bit before posting, so...

This is the first time I've asked someone to do a reading of a poem before I post it. Can I get a volunteer?

I'd like to take a look at it... I know nothing about what makes a good poem, obviously-look at mine- but I would like to help if I can...

 

[Dar~]

can i see it

 

[rikaaim]

Sorry guys, I thought this thread died and went into obscurity. I have to leave now for work. I'm running a bit late. I'll PM it to both of you tonight.

 

[angelicminx]

Sorry guys, I thought this thread died and went into obscurity. I have to leave now for work. I'm running a bit late. I'll PM it to both of you tonight.

Thanks! HAGD!

 

[ElizabethWest]

Sorry guys, I thought this thread died and went into obscurity. I have to leave now for work. I'm running a bit late. I'll PM it to both of you tonight.

You can send it to me again too if you've made revisions.

 

[rikaaim]

You can send it to me again too if you've made revisions.

Not since last night.

 

[ElizabethWest]

Not since last night.

And why not?

 

[rikaaim]

And why not?

Read blurt thread.