I was considering this.....

[Jade]

I was thinking on delving into the majical world of the "more than two people" short story... but could use a little advice on how to write this... perhaps I should post this in the author's hang out.

I read the writer's resources and none of them were very helpful for this specific thing.
I just am not sure how to go about making all parties involved seem "occupied." Does that make sense?

I guess my main concern is... does the reader need to be aware of what each person is doing and at all times?
The only "group" story I ever read was the final chapter of the "Patti" series and that of course as we all know was priceless, but my situation is going to be somewhat different.

Any suggestions/pointers?

All responses appreciated, thanks.

(Ps: The story will not be posted under "Jade," so please don't for a moment think that this was a meaningless thread if you don't find a Jade story with a threesome a few months from now! lol)

 

[Silverlily]

I think I would write it mainly from one person's view, what the other two are doing to her. Please make it a her, I'm so tired of guy gets two chicks stuff! The idea of a woman being tormented by two lovers, one man and one woman is very yummy.

Just my two cents.

 

[Weird Harold]

Any suggestions/pointers

The simplest viewpoint is omnicient, where you describe things as seen by an outside observer.

If you choose to tell the scene from the viewpoint of one of the participants, stick with that one character throughout. Tell what that one character sees, hears, feels, and thinks.

 

[Dixon Carter Lee]

I suggest some research. Meet me, Melody and Lovely Latina in the lobby of the Milford Plaza, 44th and 8th, Midtown Manhattan, tomorrow night at midnight. Wear a red carnation and carry a copy of The Wall Street Journal so I'll know you.

 

[Jade]

Kitten: Actually.. this particular scene will have about 3 women and one guy ... maybe.. still thinking...

(it is in a multi-part story so I have lots to think on..)

WH: I am with you on that. I am sticking with the omniscient thing.. and so far... that seems to be working out the best.. thank you for your suggestions!


DCL: After reading about your new "story idea" on Laurel's thread regarding literotica searches... I am just not too sure it would be safe to meet you after all!
But then again...
Ah what the hell.. but wait! How will WE find YOU?!