I wanna hear your opinions about my new story!

First of all, it appears that this story (or some version of it) was published on Lit about two years ago in Interracial. Anyway, you have to provide a link to it from the Story Feedback section and ask for opinions there. You can't just post chunks of it (or maybe all of it!) on a Forum here and ask for feedback. Someone already said that in response to the duplicate post you made here.

If this is a new version of it, you can either edit the old one or submit it with a new title.

Also, you already got eighteen comments on IR the first time around, and the majority of them weren't too flattering. So what have you been doing in the last two years? I don't see anything else from you since then.
 
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