Phantom300
Phucking Phantastic
- Joined
- Nov 23, 2018
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So, first the down and dirty. I have an Incest/Taboo story, brother/sister, with just shy of 17k words. Needs an editor/beta reader to give me some feedback and do some light editing - I'm bad about period at the end of sentences and closing quotation marks, simple typos, that sort of stuff.
What I could really use above all that is a woman's perspective, especially on the exposition the sister gives in the latter half of the story. It made sense in my head, but I'm curious if it translates well. I know most of the readers aren't going to care much one way or the other, but I like a healthy dose of realism in my erotica, and I don't want someone rolling there eyes at my writing.
I'm actually kind of worried about submitting this one. I know it isn't going to score as high as some of my others. It's VERY light on actual sexual content. There's no direct sex between them, the closest I go in this one is some mutual masturbation.
What I could really use above all that is a woman's perspective, especially on the exposition the sister gives in the latter half of the story. It made sense in my head, but I'm curious if it translates well. I know most of the readers aren't going to care much one way or the other, but I like a healthy dose of realism in my erotica, and I don't want someone rolling there eyes at my writing.
I'm actually kind of worried about submitting this one. I know it isn't going to score as high as some of my others. It's VERY light on actual sexual content. There's no direct sex between them, the closest I go in this one is some mutual masturbation.
