I need the Spanish Translation

[Whispersecret]

I'm writing a story and I need some translations:

"my passage" - as in paying for passage on a boat.

"Let me repay you."

"I am yours tonight." or something similar.

“Dios, you are sweet, capitan. I taste your <here I want a word that means juice/precum/fluid something like that, but something not as crude>"

I'll likely have more phrases as the story gets written, but that's all for now! Thank you!

 

[Juliangel]

price of the ticket translates to precio del boleto

Let me repay you roughly translates to déjeme compensarle meaning to compensate you.

I am your tonight would be Soy el tuyo esta noche

taste his juice would be gusto sus jugos

 

[Whispersecret]

Thanks, Peach.

But is there a more...I don't know...poetic(?) word other than boleto? "Passage" in English has a more romantic connotation to it than "ticket." That's what I'm looking for.

As for the last sentence, I need the whole thing:

"I taste your honey now. My God, you are sweet like <some Spanish sweet thing>." (Sorry, I changed it here. I can't help but rewrite.)

 

[GuyJD]

Try Lycos.com
That's where I was getting translations when I was seeing my Mexican girlfriend to impress her with my litarary talents.

 

[Rosebud]

try emailing siren

 

[DriveSouth]

Love to read the end product ...


Good mornin'

 

[Whispersecret]

You have but to ask, and I'll send you the part I have so far.