I need some to edit/proofread

[blackmonsterdick]

Im currently writing another submission. I write interracial stories based on personal experience so recalling memories and writing them so they make sense cane be a little hard. so any feedback would be great. My email is [personal info prohibited per our forum guidelines]

 

[_Lynn_]

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[blackmonsterdick]

MY PM's are now on

So, if anyone want to help me edit my story please send me a message. I am making it much longer then my first story which I was told was short