I need help.

[Comshaw]

I can't find anything useful, My minds dead, and this thing called a brain has dried up in my head! -_-

I can't find anything useful, My minds dead,
and this thing called a brain has dried up in my head!


Hmmmmm

Comshaw

 

[Super-Surprise]

.....................

 

[MarcelineTheVampireQueen]

No! at the beginning it supposed to be that she kept her legs closed. Not that the guy fucked her. -_-

 

[MarcelineTheVampireQueen]

I can't find anything useful, My minds dead,
and this thing called a brain has dried up in my head!


Hmmmmm

Comshaw

Lol it rhymes! cool! :]

 

[Jaystorme]

No! at the beginning it supposed to be that she kept her legs closed. Not that the guy fucked her. -_-

If you want other people to write your poem for you, you can't get picky!

 

[bronzeage]

Okay, what about this,
His body drifted through my mind always.
He had made a sinner change her ways.
From on her knees, To saying thank you, and please.
All for him, he only wanted a virgin, So she casted away her burden.
She was known as a maneater, letting her reputation beat her.
But his christian ways, put her into a lustful haze, and she was dragged to church.
Learning the prayers, and such, was just to much.
She fled, leaving her lustful church man, and into the arms of a biker band.
She was then used, and forced into her old ways.
On her knees like the good old days, all the while thinking "What was this guy's name?"
...
I think the ending sucked ... help me fix it! :[ Please!

It doesn't even rhyme.

 

[blobfish]

There once was a nice eye rhyme,
that amused us all every time,
my friends it would slaughter,
I'd kill them with laughter,
but it's not as funny as "chyme".
(Look it up)