I need help

Nobody Special's wife

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I need help with my story please

This is my first story I'm gonna put on lit and I just don't know what to do next...I have been playing with story for a month now....I need HELP!!!!!


But anyhow this is the begining of my story lol I haven't even got to the middle yet lol

She sits there by the cliff watching the sea. Waiting for her man to set her free from her pain. She has all the needs and wants and yet she has to wait for her man. For his ship to come in to port.


The Painter watches this angel by the cliffs and paints her every expression her longs her wants her needs. He feels him self-get hard. And masturbates his needing flesh. Because he wants this angel like No other woman he has had before.


She gets up its going to be dark she say" to her self.
As she starts to walk home she sees a man painting.

She walks up to him...Hello she says". Painter says" Hello my name is Chase. May I ask who you are?" She says" Hello my name is Lisa. What are you painting?


Oh! Chase says". Well as he try's to hide his hard on. I'm painting you! I say you by the cliffs and I just couldn't help my self.

Lisa looks at him and smiles that is all right I don't mind would you like to have some coffee with me?

Chase No I'm sorry I have to get going. . But I will meet you here tomorrow is that all right.

Lisa smiles and says that would be just fine. I will see you tomorrow..


THE WIFE
 
Some nice ideas there. You may want to be a little more patient with the sex though. Are you dyslexic by the way?
 
Yea I know it shows right...I was diagnosed with severl diabiltys They thought I would never learn how to read...I still have problems reading and digesting info...But I do spell bad but what can I say...I try now if laurel would get me a spell check for us I would be just fine lol
 
I like your story.

I think now Lisa should stab Chase with a hot fireplace poker, rip his face off with a chainsaw and then fuck his dead ass with a baseball bat strapped on with barb wire.

Pretend it's your husband.
 
Deb has this happen to you lately lol:D

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P.S. Why are you ingnoreing me?? :( I'm hurt~sniff~ sniff~
 
We all know you need help....

But the real question is..... What kind of help?
 
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