I Need help on punctuation or formatting .

[realthings]

hello folks .


i need some help on my story for some punctuation and little bit of spelling .

my story telling about a relationship between me and a woman who came my fetishes partner .

actually its long story and containing tough domination and lot of humiliation so i hope if any editor here has decided to help me will be interested in the tags and info mentioned below :

Story info :

22600 words . 2 chapters but able to split in more .

Tags : fetishes , domination, humiliation, strap-on, toilet training , scat, piss.

i need your help guys so somebody give me a hand .