I need an editor!

[SweetFallenAngel]

I wrote my first erotic story and need someone to edit it as well as give me advise and suggestions. I have a link to my story in my pic post and have gotten great comments on it.

I don't know what classification it would be therefore need advise! It is a true story of what I do when my hubby is out of town working and what we do when he comes home. There is sex between couples, A threesome ect.. If your interested in reading it please visit the link below or let me know! Thanks.

Here is the link
https://***************/document/edit?id=1T0lARMUCQ67Prwg7fy1hy8qAEwSbMk74eXlKO-4DalQ&hl=en

 

[deisatru]

Angel, First thing I would tell you is to go through it again and keep one tense. You start off in the past tense, switch to the present tense, then switch back to the past tense. Once this is done, if you would like me to edit it, send it to me. I am available as an editor and my email is available in my profile.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

I wrote my first erotic story and need someone to edit it as well as give me advise and suggestions. I have a link to my story in my pic post and have gotten great comments on it.

I don't know what classification it would be therefore need advise! It is a true story of what I do when my hubby is out of town working and what we do when he comes home. There is sex between couples, A threesome ect.. If your interested in reading it please visit the link below or let me know! Thanks.

Here is the link
https://***************/document/edit?id=1T0lARMUCQ67Prwg7fy1hy8qAEwSbMk74eXlKO-4DalQ&hl=en

Stop being cute. I can't tell pink font from the background. Black and white best. Just me.

 

[meathead96]

Stop being cute. I can't tell pink font from the background. Black and white best. Just me.

Tried to access the document. Told me I didn't have permission. Sent a request. Waiting on a response now

 

[ravi64]

Tried to access the document. Told me I didn't have permission. Sent a request. Waiting on a response now

ditto