I need an editor please

[togitc]

Hello,
I just finished the first draft on a Gay Male story 2159 words by Words count. I need someone to check grammatical errors, punctuation, and any input would be appreciated. I'm online YIM right now or PM me.

Thank You,
Togitc

Edit:
For this installment I have input already, I just need the mechanics of the story looked at. I'm going to give it another look to catch what I can but another set of eyes would be very helpful. I am planning on writing a part 2 and possibly a part 3

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Hello,
I just finished the first draft on a Gay Male story 2159 words by Words count. I need someone to check grammatical errors, punctuation, and any input would be appreciated. I'm online YIM right now or PM me.

Thank You,
Togitc

Edit:
For this installment I have input already, I just need the mechanics of the story looked at. I'm going to give it another look to catch what I can but another set of eyes would be very helpful. I am planning on writing a part 2 and possibly a part 3

To be honest I'm not comfortable with the subject matter, yet I also remain open-minded.

PM me, but there are stories ahead of yours. I'll preview and let you know my decision quickly.