I need an editor for a Group/Submission story.

[IWriteForHer]

Hello All!
I have been a long time reader/lurker - now I have written some stories.

The first one I would like to publish is a group story with a minor "submission" overtone and a dash of light bondage and spanking thrown in for good measure.

Spelling, punctuation and grammar are passable. Theme is clear and maintains continuity. Word count is 8413.

I would like to work with both a female and male editor (if that is possible). My long term objective is to learn how to cater to both female and male readers within the same story.

Thank you in advance.
IWriteForHer

 

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[IWriteForHer]

EXCERPT:


As the alcohol coursed through Susan's veins, she was warming. And, for a moment, she felt a craving between her thighs as she watched Charlie and Sean continue to kiss passionately. She imagined she could see Charlie's hand caress Sean's hardness, through his shorts but, she didn't have a clear view. She was broken from her reverie a moment later when simultaneously Reg got up, without a word, to walk down the hall and Har pushed his cup forward to Susan for a refill. Susan obliged him as she had done several times so far. Har had an earnest look in his eyes each time she did it. One time she made out to have accidently dropped Har's cup and leaned over innocently to pick it up all while providing Har with a perfect view of her cleavage and full breasts. Susan was usually always modest but, somehow it seemed like her modesty would appear more as a contrivance in this situation than to just act a little primal. Susan reveled in the teasing, it was driving Har crazy and that made her tingle as she tried to act casual about the whole affair.

 

[IWriteForHer]

EXCERPT:

In this same moment, Har returned from the shower to hear her say, as he sat down, "If by that you mean 'do I want to impersonate an OB/GYN' then my answer is that I have no desire to put my fingers on another woman's vagina. I'd much rather be a urologist and play with penises all day." If she, herself, had felt a little shocked at what she said, the rest of the table was stunned and their eyes revealed a simultaneous passion that lit up the room. When Reg caught his breath, he retorted, "A-ha! So, you admit, by implication, that you like to touch your own vagina?!" Alec lowered his head into his hand thinking that the worst of his friend's behavior had been over. Susan laughed and said in a sheepish voice, "Well, do you like to rub your own cock?"

The word 'cock' seemed to be an ancient incantation. The men hearing the word, coming from her mouth, seemed to shudder in expectation and ecstasy. She smiled and wanted to say it over and over again. She found her legs crossed in her chair and her hand resting gently, but discreetly, against her clit. It took them a minute to regain their composure and it was then she noticed Devin returning from a shower, though she had not seen him go. And, at that, Gunther passed him and headed down the hall.