Chimney Sweep
Kind of a big deal
- Joined
- Sep 26, 2003
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- 114
Howdy. I finally squeezed out a couple of stories and they need a once-over or two before I let them out the door.
Party full of pussy - either group sex or fetish, I'm not sure. Happy to take a suggestion on that topic. 8000 words.
In Charge, chapter 4 - see the previous chapters if interested. Erotic couplings and a lot of dildos. 6600 words.
Party should be damn near bullet proof, but I am happy to hear any editing wisdom you've got. In Charge should be good to go as well, but it might be a little rockier.
I am looking for help with language, grammar, ugly little boo-boos that detract from the story. And if you find something bigger than a booboo then I want to know about it.
Check my work. I think about 40% of my work is HOT, so I'm not a complete typewriter monkey.
Thanks for your consideration.
Chimney Sweep
Party full of pussy - either group sex or fetish, I'm not sure. Happy to take a suggestion on that topic. 8000 words.
In Charge, chapter 4 - see the previous chapters if interested. Erotic couplings and a lot of dildos. 6600 words.
Party should be damn near bullet proof, but I am happy to hear any editing wisdom you've got. In Charge should be good to go as well, but it might be a little rockier.
I am looking for help with language, grammar, ugly little boo-boos that detract from the story. And if you find something bigger than a booboo then I want to know about it.
Check my work. I think about 40% of my work is HOT, so I'm not a complete typewriter monkey.
Thanks for your consideration.
Chimney Sweep
