Liar
now with 17% more class
- Joined
- Dec 4, 2003
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Before the riots start...I already have one. This is for authorly stuff.
Here's what I need right about...soon:
A woman,
who is eihter native English, or just very Brit-speech savvy,
and who has never been to the Skagerrak sea,
and who can read.
That would fill all the qualifications for being a Reality Checker for the story I'm just about finished with.
It's a) with a female protagonist, and pretty much from her perspective. I've never done that in more serious smut before, so I'd like to know if I've fallen into any cliché traps along the way.
It contains b) an English character. Who is supposed to speak the part. But I don't know Angloisms from Americanisms unless they wear a name tag, so I'd need help gettng his lines free of non UK stuff.
It takes place on c) the island I wrote it on, in the Swedish Skagerrak peninsula. And since I know it by heart, it was extra difficult to describe. Might be too little, or totally overcooked. I couldn't say. An outsider's perspective would help.
I'll finish the damn thing tomorrow. I'm in the middle of some serious petting right now, but that's pretty much all that is left.
Anybody I can steal for a moment? I'd batter my eyelashes, if I had any.
Here's what I need right about...soon:
A woman,
who is eihter native English, or just very Brit-speech savvy,
and who has never been to the Skagerrak sea,
and who can read.
That would fill all the qualifications for being a Reality Checker for the story I'm just about finished with.
It's a) with a female protagonist, and pretty much from her perspective. I've never done that in more serious smut before, so I'd like to know if I've fallen into any cliché traps along the way.
It contains b) an English character. Who is supposed to speak the part. But I don't know Angloisms from Americanisms unless they wear a name tag, so I'd need help gettng his lines free of non UK stuff.
It takes place on c) the island I wrote it on, in the Swedish Skagerrak peninsula. And since I know it by heart, it was extra difficult to describe. Might be too little, or totally overcooked. I couldn't say. An outsider's perspective would help.
I'll finish the damn thing tomorrow. I'm in the middle of some serious petting right now, but that's pretty much all that is left.
Anybody I can steal for a moment? I'd batter my eyelashes, if I had any.
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