hey Lady!
Thanks for your input.
√ Sound like I "nailed it"...
Can you see any emotion in either?
I think that you did
And that one pic seems to lead to this one. Both show much emotion and passion, very nicely done.
a different kind of emotion...
Thinking about other drawings, I don't get to actually see myself during sex...I wonder if that contributes to the perception of a certain "flatness" of emotion.
Never-the-less I should be able to render that via empathy and even seeing (plenty) of photographic dipictions.
I do see the woman's reactions (whether feigned or genuine)
I feel there is some passion/intensity in this one.
And, as I sometimes do, using an "x-ray" or transparency technique (you can find this used in some contemporary Japanese erotica)
Not in that instance though. Sometimes I will draw from a suggestion, or just an odd concept, that is not actually a fantasy or experience of mine.
Good to hear.
I noted that you skipped over the collar one. I'm guessing that didn't "do anything" for you. That's quite all right, some drawings that i do, don't do much for me.
). 
sumthin'?
heeheee.
Too much cock exaggeration? too much BDishness?
Not enough... cum?
It's ok, you don' have to say, but I am curious. (lots of people say so — "he's rather curious")
a different kind of emotion...
Thinking about other drawings, I don't get to actually see myself during sex...I wonder if that contributes to the perception of a certain "flatness" of emotion.
Never-the-less I should be able to render that via empathy and even seeing (plenty) of photographic dipictions.
I do see the woman's reactions (whether feigned or genuine)
), though there are men who also have made good commentary. I also don't really solicit artistic/technique/feedback (but will listen), as I am confident enough in my own hand and what I want to achieve in that way. I can, and have, drawn (or painted) much more "professional" images. (it's part of my job/career). Far from a Master, but quite competent.
(I really can draw bodies accurately. I've drawn from life for many many years.)
You still have a great talent for imagination.
perfect!
not "Mean" at all. This is what you see and how you react.
You certainly are part of my target audience, though this particular image may be less to your tastes (or not at all) and obviously misses.
Naturally, I come from a male perspective, but my work is not really "for" men, it is for me, to vent and explore my own musings, fantasies and fetishes.
I also agree that the best erotic work (or ANY) presents emotion. These tend to be quick "musings", and not really what I consider "finished" work (I have so much of that to do in "real life"). On the other hand, your sort of feedback makes me a bit more aware and hopefully can address those shortcomings even in these "quickies".
For the most part, I enjoy the interactions/observations with women (I am hetero
Of course I would love that everyone loved everything I did and lavished praise. LOL
(totally unrealistic and dopey)
This one... combines some of the elements of previous (recent re-posts)
romance (kissy kisssy on the neck)
exaggeration (I use this a LOT, partially inspired by Japanese Shunga -erotic art.and how I often feel huge during passion)
anatomical "liberties" - making it "fit" and show
Sex from behind _ I like that approach (not exclusively, but(t) I do like it...a lot)
If pressed, I'd say that I am a "butt-man". I still LOVE breasts, and nipples, and thighs, and tummies and...
I do enjoy suckling.
I make quite a few images that are somewhat "strange", but that is part of the fun of erotic illustration — I can "go" places that I might want to "visit" or explore, but sometimes not actually experience.
