I like this guy

[galaxygoddess]

So another one of my quickie stories posted today (well sometime last night maybe I unno) and just now I get this email feedback:

This message contains feedback for: galaxygoddessAbout the submission: Boy in the BoughThis feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Hello Goddess,This is a great start to a story. You write well and have the knack of making dialogue flow in a natural way. Wierd people are real and this story feels as though it could be real for a lot of us. But, you need a proofreader. The fact that a large minority of folks don't know site from sight there are those of us who do and it distracts from a fun read a bit. Same with shuttered and shuddered. Orgasmic activy is shudder while closing off a window with boards is shutter. I am sure to some this is a little too picky. In the flow of the moment of writing many of us type wrong words as they come without realizing we are doing it. I am not an expert in the english language so I am not critising you. I think you will be happier with the comments as they pretain to your story rather than your use of the language. I think you are great.

I like this guy. Not just because he likes my writing, but because he gave me a good insight to my own work. Often I write at 3 am when I'm half awake, or when i wake up suddenly in the morning with eveything pre-printed in my head. This was a morning write.

I reread it the next day instead of posting it. Then I gave it to three different friends who read it. One is a detail person who is quite picky, the next a really bad speller, and the third just really likes my stuff. None of them found any problem with my story. Not one. So I posted it thinking "ok this is good"

I always getthe usual "your stories are great" "I want to see more" etc etc. Well, those are great for my ego, but not much else.


This guy, I like. He's helpful I'd like to see more like this.


I'm sure everyone else would too. I just thought I'd bring it up.

I like this guy.

 

[Stella_Omega]

I always getthe usual "your stories are great" "I want to see more" etc etc. Well, those are great for my ego, but not much else.


This guy, I like. He's helpful I'd like to see more like this.


I'm sure everyone else would too. I just thought I'd bring it up.

I like this guy.

Yes indeed! AND s/he was articulate, and non-abusive in doing so. Kudos, whoever-you-are!

 

[DeeZire]

To 'shutter' during an orgasm means you're shuddering so hard, your teeth are chattering.

 

[THROBBS]

To 'shutter' during an orgasm means you're shuddering so hard, your teeth are chattering.

really?

I thought is was a shuddering (shaking) orgasm in which she closes her opening (shutters). You know the kind, where you cannot bear to be touched for a minute.

 

[CWatson]

If you want constructive feedback on your stories, you can always try to find an editor over at the Editor's Forum. I mean, that's kind of what we're there for.