I just wrote my first erotica!!!

[kaitlyn_sun]

I write all the time for school, but this is my first time writing anything for lit. I've reread it a few times, and I'll need to print it out and go over it for errors, but for now, I'd love to get some outside advice.

It's 6000 words, about 12 pages. I tried to write it in a very immediate, personal voice, and to avoid droning on to much, so hopefully it will be an easy read.

If any of you would be willing to spend a half hour or so reading my story and then telling me what you think, could you pm me? thanks in advance!

 

[pacifist91w]

Needs more info!

It's 6000 words, about 12 pages. I tried to write it in a very immediate, personal voice, and to avoid droning on to much, so hopefully it will be an easy read....

Congrats on beginning to write for your own (and possibly for others') enjoyment!

That said, you'll get more response if you list two things for prospective editors:
1. Story category
2. Features that offend or put off some people (for example: incest, heavy bondage, watersports/scat, etc.)

Add these details and you might find an editor faster.

 

[Todger65]

PM sent earlier

 

[kaitlyn_sun]

Congrats on beginning to write for your own (and possibly for others') enjoyment!

That said, you'll get more response if you list two things for prospective editors:
1. Story category
2. Features that offend or put off some people (for example: incest, heavy bondage, watersports/scat, etc.)

Add these details and you might find an editor faster.

thank you for your advice!

it would simply be an erotic coupling story. I don't think there's anything offensive in it, it's just two college students having sex for the first time. one of them was me

 

[sweet_lusciousdesire]

I wouldn't change it to suit anyone. Just enjoy writing. There is a lot of fun and passion in the act of writing. Not too many people actually take the time to read our stories, but the process is enjoyable. Enjoy!

 

[Thebee123]

Whre is it?

thank you for your advice!

it would simply be an erotic coupling story. I don't think there's anything offensive in it, it's just two college students having sex for the first time. one of them was me

Like to read.

 

[_Lynn_]

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[kaitlyn_sun]

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thank you for moving the thread, i never know where to put these things

 

[_Lynn_]

thank you for moving the thread, i never know where to put these things

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