I invite your comments

[Natalie Nessus]

How can I make this better, yes?


http://natalienessus.tripod.com/

 

[Rubyfruit]

I love it, Madame.

The art and the words convey the essence of you.

Et vous êtes si beau.

Rubes.

 

[T.H. Oughts]

It looks great Nessus

 

[Natalie Nessus]

Merci

 

[DustyWolfe]

Your site looks great hon!

 

[MechaBlade]

this is better than most erotica authors' sites I have seen.

MechaBlade

 

[riff]

I like it. The black background outside of the cover and the gray hues inside convey and aura of mystery and the unknown, but not in a scarey way, rather a romantic and thoughtful way.

 

[sch00lteacher]

Very Euro. the young lady bottom left gives it that feel. She is not American.

It this a real book one could own?

Good site, no changes.

 

[freescorfr]

Classy, classy site. I love the intros. Really poingnat atmosphere's. Terrific.

 

[Guest]

 

[CarolineOh]

It is tasteful and elegant. I tried all the links and everything worked quickly and easily. I groaned at the pop-up ad, but I understand that is out of your control.
I can't see a thing that I would change.

 

[Rambling Rose]

some constructive criticism?

The second sentence in the header is redundant. I also found the three distinct and seperate shades of yellow a little distracting.

All in all, the site looks very good! It is a labour of love, is it not?

 

[Natalie Nessus]

Re: some constructive criticism?

The second sentence in the header is redundant. I also found the three distinct and seperate shades of yellow a little distracting.

All in all, the site looks very good! It is a labour of love, is it not?

Thank you, I will repair you are correct.

I do not like the yellow myself, it is not my chosen colour I am learning and will re[ai it.

Your av A wallflower, Rose? I think not

Thank you to all who have made comments about my little thing

 

[JenJ]

I like it as it is very well done I can't wait until I have time to check it out fully.

 

[Aprilsbaby]

I agree with Blushing Rose..the yellow is a bit distracting..

Cohen has always been a fav of mine tho April thinks he is an old fart..

 

[Guest]

Nessus,

Your site is beautiful. As a few of the others noted, the yellow color is a bit distracting, but to be honest, after a bit, I kind of forgot about it.

I love how you have everything set up and the way you have incorporated pictures along with your stories. It's all quite becoming.

You have done a remarkable job, Nessus, and you should be quite proud of your accomplishment. I've enjoyed your writings and look forward to the novel you have so graciously teased us with.

Enchanted

 

[Spinaroonie]

Nessie, I like it, it's simple and elegant, too many people try to overextend and go far beyond what a page needs to be.

Well done.

 

[Dhalgren]

Thank you for showing us your site..Nessus.

This is what I do for a living..
I am a graphic artist..for commercial web sites..

So first, allow me to say..that it is indeed..a very lovely site.

I’ve read all of your fiction and I think it’s tremendously amazing.

If you allow me a few critiques.

I’m not keen on the bright primary color scheme…
Perhaps tones of one color?

I’m also wondering about the left border..perhaps it should be even with the other side?

May I ask..are you planning on making this a commercial site or is this your personal page?

Are you going to make your book obtainable from your site?

 

[Fly_On_Wall]

Nessus I like it it's perfict.

I like that it's broken into secions so there is no long reading.

lots of people like me get intimidated by sites with shitloads of reading and just leave withouth looking.

 

[Cherry Blossom]

Nessus, it's a great page!

The only thing I can think of that might be nice for your visitors might be to eventually add some links. Not a huge list of things, maybe, but just some of your very favorite sites for erotic art, etc. You know such a lot and have such exquisite taste -- it seems a shame not share a bit of that too.

 

[on_the_verge]

If I may input further Dhalgren…

Originally posted by Dhalgren
If you allow me a few critiques.

I’m not keen on the bright primary color scheme…
Perhaps tones of one color?

I think the blue detracts from the rest of the page, since it is such a predominant color. I am also wondering what the “circle” symbolizes. Also, you might want to place the title further down, so that it is not trapped under the banner, thus allowing more “space” and the eyes can flow between the banner and the title (not to mention the banner will change and might make your title washed out).

I noticed you had the adult content warning towards the middle of your index page. You might consider having an initial index page with the adult content warning, an image and a title. Then a link to your main page.

I’m also wondering about the left border..perhaps it should be even with the other side?

I noticed that your pages are not contained within frames, thus when a viewer resizes the browser, your page contents do not fit 100% within. The page should probably have <CENTER> tags allowing your content to flow in the middle as opposed to breaking left. I see you are not using frames, but that’ sthe safest route to go in browser compliance.


Are you going to make your book obtainable from your site?

The image of the book should be smaller as it is conflicting or fighting for visual space with the image of the model, you?

I am not sure what kind of “look & feel you are achieving, perhaps nostalgia and a foreign ambience?

I also noticed you linked your stories off-site, to Literotica, and perhaps you should quote or advertise Lit, but if you link your stories to another site, considering your site is new, because the viewer might be sidetracked by a whole other site.

I might be confusing you or others and thinking too in depth, but I hope you can excuse me. I like the overall site and the images. I have not read your stories, but I might just start now. See, the exposure is already working.

Well, before someone smacks me or I get anymore in depth…

 

[Ferris]

I like it, it's a good start.

 

[Ferris]

I've just been back to it and it's changed again! Obviously taken some of the advice on board.

 

[Sabineteas]

Very lovely and the pictures fit. I am sure that you will make it even better as time goes on.

It's been suggested before, but links to erotic art sites that you are so well know for here.

Magnifique!

 

[Natalie Nessus]

Thank you the comments are good I am still working but it is slow