i hope someone will pick up the glove and try to write my story

[avish_mo]

hi
i hope some one will try to write down this story
its a bout two old fem friends that went to high school together
and they are now in their mid 40's , they live away from each other an dthey have some loose connection over the years
one of then (doesnt matter the names) is going through divorce
and did not get much ass lately and the other one is a widow with a 21 year old son

the divirce woman is coming over to stay until things will come down with her life and she see the other's son
and want to take him
she is asking his mom for approval and when she gets it she start to tease him and dress sluty for him
after some time over dinner they drink and with encouragment by his mom they go for it
she teaching him all of it
and they go around the house naked and tease the mom
suddenly the mom has thoughts about taking her son
from here i hope the end will be good.......

i love stories with deep description and a lot of talking between the characters
the mom of the son dont have any thoughts about taking her son (she dont have any hots for him) untill she see them both naked and eating breakfast the morning after they got together
and she thinks that her son he is a hit guy and then the thought comes up to her mind

the girlfriends never got together sexually, its that the divorce one is more open and more comfortable with her sexuallity and dare to do more and beside her wi can see the shy and silent mom.

i really like to think on the part when the divorce one is trying to convice the mom to give her premission to fuch her son

the son dont yell his mom's name in the middle of intercourse but
his mom heard their noises from her bedroom (she gave the couple her own bedroom , and took her son bedroom)
and strart her thoughts

 

[PrincessKatie]

OK....

OK so the mother's friend falls in love with her son?
Sounds good....how about she lies down with the mother doing her pussy while the son takes her from behind?
As for approval-who needs approval it's incest for god's sake.
Break the rules and make it happen

 

[avish_mo]

no rules????

if you up to it try and write down the story
the approval its part of the seduction
and i dont mind at all an orgy in the house!!!!!!!

 

[Guest]

That's what I call a story idea.

The characters are defined.
There is a plot.
It starts at the beginning, has a middle, and an end.

I wish more ideas here had this much thought behind them.

I would give this an A for effort, or should that be a 5 on here?

 

[Axeltheswede]

story idea

A humble suggestion. Look through stories posted in the incest category. Look for the style you like. Start with a complementary feedback email to the author. Share your story idea. See what happens.
I am assuming you are not writing the story yourself for some reason. And that is fine.
As an author, I have done a couple of stories after getting acquainted with a reader who had an idea he wanted to see written.
Good luck.

 

[avish_mo]

thank you , i will

thank you i will try it