I guess not...

[Furry Darkpaw]

No opinions??? Now there is something I never thought I would see within this forum. The only conclusion that I can draw from this is that either my story or myself is so uninteresting as to draw no controversy. I find this hard to believe. Oh well, *sigh* screw you too.....I will keep writing, anyway. Is good revenge to excel at that which you are thought to be deficient. Furrything.

 

[damppanties]

Gimme a link Furry thingie....

-DP.

 

[damppanties]

Ok, so I couldn't wait for the link...

I read chapters 3,4 and 5 (had read 1 and 2 earlier). Real lovely... I'm in love with the li'l guy. Keep writing.

The links for any more of you who are interested in reading it. I recommend it.

Furry Darkpaw's memberpage:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=107623


The Phaedrah Chronicles:
Ch. 3: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=52925

Ch. 4: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=59575

Ch. 5: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=63076

-DP.

 

[the_bragis]

Thanks DP.

Hello furry little one,

Yes, now I understand your nick name.

Oh well, *sigh* screw you too.....I will keep writing, anyway.

Yes, please do keep writing, but remember also, you are always more likely to receive feedback if you are first prepared to give it.

Now, I have just finished reading chapter one of The Phaedrah Chronicles . I usually wouldn't read non-human stories, but this one has me intrigued and hooked totally. What can I possibly say? This is one of the most amazing things I have read here in Lit. It's wild! It's weird! It's wonderful!

I'm digging around trying to find your profile. As I am now interested to know more about you also.

This is what I noted as I read:

I get up and pad back over to her side and slipped back into the bedroll, huddling against her for warmth and, most of all, comfort. I felt like crying as more and more of the reality of my situation became evident.

You open your story in he present tense, and it works well, only you slip between past and present, and then from here, this paragraph (which contains both) slip totally into past tense.

The dialog is quirky and interesting.

"But I remember being in another world, entirely!" I say...my ears folding back in annoyance

My cat does this when she annoyed too.

You have used chosen to use abbreviation i.e. POV SUV RP Many readers will not understand these. I don't know what SUV is.

The first chapter seems very short, thankfully, more follow.

I wish you well with your future writing.

Have a great day now,

Alex (fem)

 

[Furry Darkpaw]

Ah, Life evident within the masses!

Is humble amateur, at best...thank you for your compliments. And yes, I will keep writing. This plotline is too fun to just abandon...*giggles* Thanks again. (Furrything)