I finally did it!

Katerina Val-Kyrie

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I bet you are wondering, what the hell did Katerina finally do? Well, let me tell you, I can't wait! This might seem silly to some, but I only submitted some stories. Silly eh? First of all, they are not just stories, they are my blood, sweat and tears (of joy that is) I have to tell you, I have been a member of Literotica for a long time now, and when I first became a member, I foolishly submitted 3 stories with the help of no editor. Hell, what did I know then? Nothing, comes to mind. Anyways, when I submitted those romantic stories I felt damn proud, but not anymore. I am embarrassed to have them on Lit, and I cannot wait to have my revised versions there instead. Did I say revised? Rewrites? Well, hmmm, yes I sure did.

I have lost track of the months and the time I have spent in doing these rewrites. I am an obsessive perfectionist, and even though I submitted them Dec 15th, I still have this compulsive urge to re-read them and see if there are anymore mistakes. That would mean, more fixing, more reading, more, more, more...and then, resubmitting, once again. If I kept this up, I would never get these stories submitted, so I finally had to say enough already! Is anyone else like this? God, it almost takes the fun out of it after a time.

But, as I said, I just could not help myself. Some days, I would spend 8 hours or more, reading, editing, and changing. It gets damn monotonous reading the same stories over and over again, but I think now, it was worth it. I swear, I know them by heart, *LOL* But, they are my babies, and I feel damn proud now, and with good reason, I think. I still can't say they are perfect, Hell, I know they aren't. But, all I know, is they are 100 percent better then what I have on Literotica now, and that is good enough for me. It's weird though, everyday for the past months, I would fix something, even if only one word, one line, but now I do not have to do that anymore. Dare I read them again? I think not! Most likely I would still find something to fix. Somedays I felt exasperated, because the writers block would hit me, and I would not be able to fix a single sentence, then other days would be great and I would accomplish alot. But even with fixing one word, one sentence, one paragraph at a time, I still felt a sense of accomplishment. With every change, I only learned more; isn't that what writing is all about?

A word of warning. Rewrites are tough. I think they are alot tougher then writing a story from scratch. Being that I had no proper paragraphing, and all dialogue intermixed, I literally had to tear them apart. It was a challenge and through this challenge, I learned alot. But, be careful before submitting, read your final versions over and over if you have too. Get a good editor! When you both find no glaring spelling errors, confusing sentence structure and puncuation, only then, hit the submit key. If only I had done that so long ago.

Learning is a good thing, but in moderation I think. There is a time to let go and move on and start something new. I have done that now, Thank God. Oh, besides my revisions, I have also spent this past year writing my newest story, Summer's Day. It is considerably longer than The Fantasy and The Cabin, parts one and two, and I do hope it is enjoyed. This story, I also edited over and over again, but I think it was well worth it.

The something new I started, is a story called "New Beginnings" Hell, it might take me a year to finish it, but as long as I am confident and feel proud of my efforts, then that is all that really matters. Unlike my other stories, this one will be full of dialogue which is a change for me. So far, I have written mostly in thoughts, but at the same time, I do try to voice emotion. I just thought I would try something different this time.
Wish me luck!

Whisper, thank you so very much for putting up with me, and your wonderful talents as an editor. You helped me learn a great deal, and I appreaciate all that you have done. Again, my thanks. ((((Hugs))))

Fellow Literoticans, I have asked Whisper endless questions and with each answer, I only learned more. She is an amazing writer and I am in awe of her talents. I only hope someday, I can write like this woman! Way to go Whisper! Never be afraid to ask guys/gals, tis the only way to learn. If you have a good editor, trust me, he/she will keep you.

Also, thanks to WH, for giving me many helpful hints long ago. I have not forgotten you hon; thank you for your time.

Of course, I have to thank many of my readers also, who have read my revisions over and over again as I have completed them. I swear some of you know my storyline just as well as I do, right Gary? Anyways, you all know who you are and I will always remember your thoughtfulness.
Thank you.

Laurel, how can I forget you. Thanks so much for your endless patience in me. I appreaciate it hon, more than you know. (((( Hugs))))

I truly hope once my revisions are up, they are enjoyed by all who read them. I also hope all my time and effort will have been worth it for my readers. Remember, feedback, is always appreaciated! ;) One thing I do know, a writer writes for themselves first and foremost because they enjoy what they do. If the audience also enjoys the story through the writer's eyes and erotic mind, then they have suceeded in their goals; to become the best they can be. What more can one ask for?

Thank you for hearing me.

Yours truly,

Katerina :)

P.S. Newly added! They are finally up in the new story section or can be found under Romance. For easy, quick access, click on links below and enjoy.

The Fantasy

The Cabin One

The Cabin Two

Summer's Day

:) KitKat


[Edited by Katerina Val-Kyrie on 01-20-2001 at 05:31 AM]
 
Congratulations, Katerina. It feels good, doesn't it? And I completely agree with you about Whispersecret's talent for writing and editing. She has made my own modest efforts much better through her editing.
 
Why

Thank you very much, Skibum. Yes, it feels utterly fantastic... Overwhelming actually. Ditto, regarding Whisper, she is my role model. Hugs KitKat
 
Hmmm...

Thanks so much KillerMuffin, and also thanks for your email regarding what you thought. I really appreaciated the time you took in reading them. Since sending to you, I have done yet more fixing, editing, and changing...Why, bet that is not surprising eh? Thanks again my friend. Hugs KitKat
 
Oh, shoot. <shuffles her feet in the dirt> You're welcome.

KM, I'm working on your story, as we speak. I'm sorry I've taken so long with it.
 
Still waiting patiently. Revisions are not up as of yet. Just wanted to let anyone know who cares. *LOL* You can be sure I will be back, once they are. Hugs KitKat
 
Congratulations I know the feeling

I know how it feels, it takes me weeks to write my stories.
I have not posted one in a while, minor writer's block.
One of the stories went through at least 5 rewrites, and I was still not all that happy with them. :)
I was also a contributor on the Malteese Chain story. I look foward to reading your stories.
 
Hey BJ thanks so much. I am sorry to say, I have not read any of your work. Just wanted to let you know that my revisions will be put up as new stories. They will replace the current ones I had in Lit. Summer's Day is new also, so please, do watch for it. I will be sure to let my readers know when they are up, you can count on that...again, thank you. Hugs KitKat

[Edited by Katerina Val-Kyrie on 12-20-2000 at 07:54 AM]
 
hard work ... just rewards ...

You deserve the accolades ... your hard work shows through in your stories. Thanks for sharing with us and letting us have a part. Thank you.
 
Hey Gary, thanks so much, I appreaciate your praise. You have been a great friend this past year. Yes, I have worked very hard, I will be the first to admit that.

To anyone who may read this:

My old versions are pulled upon my request until my new ones are up, and I can't wait. I do hope they are enjoyed once they get here.

Have a great day! Hugs Kat
 
:D Again Katerina Val-Kyrie, I bow to you in recognition of all your hard work and effort. We all applaud you. (((((((((((((((((((CONGRATULAIONS)))))))))))))))))
x x x :D
 
Well done, Katerina.

It's strange how you can write something and be quite pleased with it (even after the initial rush of adrenaline has worn off), then go back and read it a month or two later and be disappointed by it.

Remember that story of mine you read a long time ago, 'Girlie Showers', about the mistress and her submissive girlfriend in the warehouse with their voyeur? I read it today and was a bit shocked and embarrassed by it. I think a lot depends on what kind of mood you're in. I'll probably read it again in a week or two and think it's ok. Also, it's so hard to stay objective about your own stories and accurately guage how they'll be read by other people.
 
Hi Roger, nice to hear from you! You know, I think you are right. The more we read our work, the more we find to fix. I think we truly are our worst critques. I know, once I learned more and began to see where I had gone wrong, I was appalled by my work. I thought to myself, they are bad, I have to fix them! It was a lot of hard work, and I cannot stress enough...on having a good editor. In my eyes, they are a must!

Anyways, I am proud to say, my stories have now been approved, finally, so that must mean, they will be here soon! Yes! Tis a good feeling...

Hugs KitKat
 
My stories are finally posted! Yes! In case anyone is wondering, they are up as new stories because they are re-writes. I have worked very hard this past year on them as well as my newest one, Summer's Day. Hope you enjoy!

Hugs KitKat

[Edited by Katerina Val-Kyrie on 01-10-2001 at 06:04 PM]
 
Updated Katrina Val-Kyrie Stories - Great!

Heartiest congratulations on your latest (and knowing you probably NOT your last) revision of "The Fantasy", "The Cabin" series, and "Summers Day" stories. I continue to be amazed how your stories just get better and better each time you go back and revamp them. You can certainly tell you, Whisper, and your other contributors have been busy. Your latest versions are really great romance stories and my god you've really spiced them up! Wow! and Thanks for your continued efforts for the readers on Literotica. I LOVE your work. I never even considered reading a romance story until I started reading some of your work. Now I've opened my mind up to a totally different type of work.

Thanks so much Katerina. Please keep writing your wonderful stories!

Phantom.
 
I read part 1 of 'The Cabin' when the BB first stopped working today. Excellent stuff.
 
Interesting, funny, exciting, descriptive, adorable,sexy,
desirable, attractive, lovable, approachable, listener,conversionalist, writter, author, modest,bashful, proud.

Well Katerina, enough about me :LOL:

Just how I see you, you number one fan.
 
Eric, you are just to much! Full of yourself aren't ya! *LOL*

Thanks for the kinds words!

Roger, you have my thanks also. Glad you enjoyed The Cabin. I hope you enjoy the others as well.

Phantom, you have been with me from the start of my revisions and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for all you have done. I am sure you know my stories almost as well as I do. Your the best...Again, thank you.

I aim to please my readers and through the amazing feedback I have gotten, I only strive to do better and further my goals as a writer. I have worked hard this past year on my rewrites and new story, Summer's. I think it has been worth it. I have learned so much and the challenge of doing revisons was alot tougher than writing a story from scratch. But, in doing this, it has helped me to see where my weakness is and to only better myself. I truly hope they are enjoyed by all who love to be swept away in a romance story.

Enjoy...Hugs KitKat

[Edited by Katerina Val-Kyrie on 01-13-2001 at 07:05 AM]
 
Just a thought

In my opinion, alot of readers do not really venture into the romance section, but I think they should. There are alot of amazing stories in the romance catagory that I think are not getting read. I have the feeling ppl enjoy non-consent, and forbidden lust, such as incest a whole lot more.

But, romance can surprise the reader at times. Here is one comment a lady friend made to me.

Kat (The Cabin One)

Ohhhhhhhh, my goodness lady! Verrrrrrrrry nice and I am truly amazed. Bondage? I just never expected you to be writing a romance story with this type of content. Extremely well done, tastefully chosen words that really kept my interest and...well you can guess I am sure...*devil wink* Now on to Cabin 2. Thank you very much for sharing.

Bondage in romance, why yes...why not? You never know what you will find unless you venture there...

Hugs KitKat
 
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