I f*ing love breaking the fourth wall

LaRascasse

I dream, therefore I am
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From a story of mine in progress

Eddie said, "Honey, I think we need to have sex now. The readers are getting impatient."

"Right, I forgot. This is a Literotica story after all"
 
I think you might both love If on a Winter's Night a Traveler, by Italo Calvino, if you haven't read it already. Too many reasons and complications to explain, except that alternate chapters are written in the second person, making you the reluctant protagonist.

First line: 'You are about to begin reading Italo Calvino’s new novel, If on a winter’s night a traveler.'

Last line (spoken to 'your' lover in bed, who has just asked you to turn out the lights): 'And you say, "Just a moment, I’ve almost finished 'If on a winter’s night a traveler' by Italo Calvino."
 
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