lne_iii
Really Really Experienced
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If this is not the place for such things, but if it is, I would like feedback from you all on some of my writing.
LNE
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Perspicuous Genocide
Have you ever lost your mind?
Did you find it again?
Have you ever found someone elses?
What was in it?
Give it back.
I haven’t lost my mind, I’ve simply forgotten where I put it.
I never forgot where my emotions were, I simply hid them for a long time.
Somewhere, far beyond my realm of mortal thought, everything melds together.
We love, We hate, we cry, we smile, we feel.
Frowning into the mirror, putting on our armor…it will not protect us.
Pretending not to feel will not PROTECT YOU.
It will kill you from the inside out.
For, when we pretend not to feel, we focus more on our feelings.
‘Suppressing’ all feeling is not at all possible.
Had we not suffered, pleasure would be a foreign concept.
Fires burning within, so cold…
They cannot save you.
No one is immune to the feeling,
Mind over matter they say,
If you don’t mind then it doesn’t matter.
EVERYTHING MATTERS!
Get over yourself. You’re human like the rest of us.
We cannot live if we do not feel, we cannot die if we do not live.
Live! Love! Hurt! Burn! Hate! Cry! SCREAM! SMILE! FEEL!
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Inner Vision
Two, two, a sword and a pen…
It is with these that revolutions begin.
The brute force of an idea cannot be quelled.
Everything has it’s time…
Everything has a purpose!
The time for rebirth is now.
Our movement will not stray from its purpose.
Our credo, our mission statement…
Is to end the systems of thought that lead to hatred, to war, to injustice.
These cyclic displays of despotism will come to an end.
We will be heard.
If it seems that no one is listening…
Perhaps we are not being loud enough.
All our lives we’ve been told to be quiet.
The time for being quiet has passed.
Do actions really speak louder than words?
Does anything get done if we do not speak at all?
Those who seek truth and justice will find it.
Those who wield the pen will spread truth to the masses.
Those who wield the sword will bring justice to the guilty.
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Checkmate
Cursor, Cursor on my screen…
Blink Blink Blink.
It drives me mad.
“Say Something!” It screams at me.
“I’m THINKING!” I scream back.
Yet it persists.
Blinking.
Blink Blink Blink.
It’s a battle I cannot win.
Lose? Never. It’s an everlasting game of chess.
Perpetual strategy.
No time clocks.
An infinite amount of pieces.
It will never tire.
I will never surrender.
A truly eternal battle.
I eventually have to stop writing.
...Difference is…
I can turn my opponent off.
Woosha.
LNE
----------------------------------------------------------
Perspicuous Genocide
Have you ever lost your mind?
Did you find it again?
Have you ever found someone elses?
What was in it?
Give it back.
I haven’t lost my mind, I’ve simply forgotten where I put it.
I never forgot where my emotions were, I simply hid them for a long time.
Somewhere, far beyond my realm of mortal thought, everything melds together.
We love, We hate, we cry, we smile, we feel.
Frowning into the mirror, putting on our armor…it will not protect us.
Pretending not to feel will not PROTECT YOU.
It will kill you from the inside out.
For, when we pretend not to feel, we focus more on our feelings.
‘Suppressing’ all feeling is not at all possible.
Had we not suffered, pleasure would be a foreign concept.
Fires burning within, so cold…
They cannot save you.
No one is immune to the feeling,
Mind over matter they say,
If you don’t mind then it doesn’t matter.
EVERYTHING MATTERS!
Get over yourself. You’re human like the rest of us.
We cannot live if we do not feel, we cannot die if we do not live.
Live! Love! Hurt! Burn! Hate! Cry! SCREAM! SMILE! FEEL!
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Inner Vision
Two, two, a sword and a pen…
It is with these that revolutions begin.
The brute force of an idea cannot be quelled.
Everything has it’s time…
Everything has a purpose!
The time for rebirth is now.
Our movement will not stray from its purpose.
Our credo, our mission statement…
Is to end the systems of thought that lead to hatred, to war, to injustice.
These cyclic displays of despotism will come to an end.
We will be heard.
If it seems that no one is listening…
Perhaps we are not being loud enough.
All our lives we’ve been told to be quiet.
The time for being quiet has passed.
Do actions really speak louder than words?
Does anything get done if we do not speak at all?
Those who seek truth and justice will find it.
Those who wield the pen will spread truth to the masses.
Those who wield the sword will bring justice to the guilty.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Checkmate
Cursor, Cursor on my screen…
Blink Blink Blink.
It drives me mad.
“Say Something!” It screams at me.
“I’m THINKING!” I scream back.
Yet it persists.
Blinking.
Blink Blink Blink.
It’s a battle I cannot win.
Lose? Never. It’s an everlasting game of chess.
Perpetual strategy.
No time clocks.
An infinite amount of pieces.
It will never tire.
I will never surrender.
A truly eternal battle.
I eventually have to stop writing.
...Difference is…
I can turn my opponent off.
Woosha.
