I ...............Am Yours

[kindredliz]

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[WickedEve]

Welcome to the board.
I have a question. Why all the ellipses between "I" and "Am Yours?" Is there some significance there?

 

[kindredliz]

I dunno....

Just kinda, I

Me

On my own

But still "yours"

Me

On my ow,not wanting to be too attached, but still, "his"

I know, I know, it's crap!

I liked it and "He" liked it tho

xx

 

[WickedEve]

Re: I dunno....

On my ow,not wanting to be too attached, but still, "his"

Then there is significance in the title. You put distance between "I" and "am yours" for a reason. Maybe what you said about being on your own, not wanting to be too attached but still his would make a good poem.

 

[kindredliz]

I'm working on it....

How I'm still not used to "belonging" but I like it etc..

If I feel brave enough maybe I'll post when I'm done

 

[WickedEve]

Re: I'm working on it....

How I'm still not used to "belonging" but I like it etc..

If I feel brave enough maybe I'll post when I'm done

I'd like to see that one. I think it'll make an interesting poem.