I posted last week "Passions of sin erupt in mother 01" and I thank you for all the feedback. Good and bad. No what makes me more pleased is that there are some idiots or I could say jealous people out there that don't have no place in this site. But I still dont mind. One says that my english is so bad! And another asks if it is my 4th or 5fth language. For the first I have this to say. I am not a writer and I am just trying to release some fantasies. Many people enjoy it. I bet you can even write five pages of a story that would have any interest at all. Critics are critics because they can't do anything better in their life. As for the second guy, at least I speak and write 5 languages while you can't even write yours. You think you can write a story that will interest anyone? I doubt it. You will probably steal it and copy it. I doubt you would do that either cause you are so lazy to do that too. Maybe you should go to another site were novelists write. Everyone has the bad word in their mouth ready to come out.
Now for the last one that says that the son couldn't recognize the mother in the cinema! In the dark and with a little bit of fantasy everything can happen. You watch a James Bond movie that is completely science fiction and you complain about my story plot?
I guess because all my stories where rated hot some others get upset. I am not doing it for the ratings or glory or else I wouldn't be writing in here.
Simple things are better than complexed. Just because some people use more fancy words does not mean that it is better. Imagine this conversation in bed:
"Oh! Darling! Please penetrate my vagina with your penis! My uterus has so much need for you sperm!"
Common! Get real! If you don't like my stories don't read them!
For those that like them, I hope my next one will satisfy you all. And also hope to bring you to orgasms as some of your stories bring me.
P.S.
I wish we could get rid of these smart asses that think they won the PULITZER prize. I bet you they wouldn't even remember what they wrote once their done!
Now for the last one that says that the son couldn't recognize the mother in the cinema! In the dark and with a little bit of fantasy everything can happen. You watch a James Bond movie that is completely science fiction and you complain about my story plot?
I guess because all my stories where rated hot some others get upset. I am not doing it for the ratings or glory or else I wouldn't be writing in here.
Simple things are better than complexed. Just because some people use more fancy words does not mean that it is better. Imagine this conversation in bed:
"Oh! Darling! Please penetrate my vagina with your penis! My uterus has so much need for you sperm!"
Common! Get real! If you don't like my stories don't read them!
For those that like them, I hope my next one will satisfy you all. And also hope to bring you to orgasms as some of your stories bring me.
P.S.
I wish we could get rid of these smart asses that think they won the PULITZER prize. I bet you they wouldn't even remember what they wrote once their done!