I am a freak.

[Sateema Lunasi]

I finished my story for the Halloween contest thingie and it turned out much different than I expected it too, much more twisted than I had expected. I think it is pretty good and I would like to hear what people think of it if you have the inclination. (Please please please!!!!!!!) If it is good, I am thinking of editing it and making it a little longer, a bit more mainstream and maybe making it a series.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=25815

 

[Marxist]

I rarely say anything overwhelmingly positive about the stories I read on this site. I look at literotica as a writer's online workshop, not simply a jerk fest (although we all have our moments don't we). That being said, I found Halloween Carnival to be well written and without a doubt the best Halloween story so far. Should you turn it into a series? I don't know, only if you turn out pieces with this much depth. Keep at it!

MARXIST

 

[Rrrosyn]

I don't usually agree....

I haven't been posting long. So far I find I don't always agree with Marxist.

I do agree on three things.

Your work is great. I wouldn't try to fix something that works so well.

Writing one great piece and turning it into a series is hard. I had sequel ideas for my last submision until it got a good review. Now I am not sure I can live up to it!

Finally, I like to think of Literotica as more than just a website that gives peopl orgasms. Erotic literature has been hidden for too long and needs to come out. It is literature. Even pornography deserves to be recognized when quality is present. Learning from each other's successes and mistakes, sharing ideas and being open minded can make recognition possible.

My nickle. (Inflation.)

 

[Sateema Lunasi]

blushing

Oh wow...thank you.

Okay, I am SOOOO off to write now.

 

[Rubyfruit]

I loved it! I felt like I was really getting to know the characters and found myself sad when it ended. I want to know what's going to happen at carnival!

Please continue!

Ruby

 

[The_old_man]

You will write the sequil in time for holloween, or many readers will inundate you with complaints.

 

[Bubblegoose]

Blimey

My my my...I wasn't aware that my best friend could write things like that! Good work, Sat. By the way Sat, I circulated your story around the office over here, which the crew got a kick out of. You have been revealed my friend.

It is a kick ass story, creeped me out.