BigBadWulff
Really Experienced
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"Humans are a Nuisance"
NOTES:
NOTES:
First, this story is ready for Character Sheets.
PM me after you take a look at the OOC Thread.
There are some important facts in there about the story,
as well as some important Dos and Don'ts
for your first post.
Second, I did a major rewrite of this first IC post,
so if you are interested in joining,
you'll need to read it again. Sorry, and thanks.
The Planet Vora
Dusk
Seven dead, four critical ... most the rest of'em, just bumps'n'cuts...
Derek Green surveyed the survivors sitting or laying on the ceiling of the now upside down Emergency Escape Craft, then stepped outside to look at the others gathered around a slowly growing fire. He continued his thought, Could have been worse. Much worse.
He had no idea of how his assessment was so dead on, emphasis on dead.
Before the evacuation of the Rebirth had even begun, half of the 5000+ people aboard were dead or about to be. The space debris -- likely from an unexpected comet passing through the system or a disintegrated meteor kicked out of the belt -- had penetrated the hull in a multitude of locations. As if they had been the ones moving thousands of kilometers an hour rather than the ship itself, tiny particles of rock penetrated bodies and hulls alike with bullet like speed and lethality, killing many outright and many more slowly.
Many of those not killed or incapacitated by the debris simply couldn't reach the emergency escape crafts. Of the 48 EECs integrated into the belly of Rebirth, only 26 disengaged with passengers, some crammed full and others barely loaded. Of those 26, only 18 made it through the atmosphere of Vora III -- not the settlement transport's original destination -- without burning up. Of those 18, only 9 achieved a successful landing, otherwise known as a controlled crash and defined as a 75% survival rate.
In the end, fewer than 400 men, women, and children had made it to the surface of Vora alive.
Derek didn't know any of those statistics, of course. From the moment his EEC blasted away from the Rebirth, those inside it had been on their own and blind: there was no communication with the mother ship, nor were the windowless craft's external sensors working, meaning they had no idea of what was happening outside nor of where they were going. All Derek knew now was that these 49 people were alive.
For now...
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