How to write a Loving Wives tale?

I feel like the LW category label is too broad when compared to all the other categories. Seriously, when someone is looking for hands tied and nipples fried - they go to the BDSM, looking for dueling swords - the gay section, brotherly love - incest... etc. However, the LW encapsulates so many different story angles! There's the 'cheating bitch' stories, 'my gullible neighbors wife' stories, the 'watched and loved it', 'watched and hated it', 'my revenge', 'moved on', 'my wife invited her friends', 'my wife can make a great sandwich'.... the list of different angles and emotions an author can take is endless!
So, generally, I feel that often readers tend to be confused and insulted when the expectations of what they wanted to read doesn't match the plot line.
Perhaps the LW category should be further broken down in sub-classifications. Or maybe it's best to leave it as is... because, sometimes the chaos is the enjoyment.
The chaos is part of why there are so many comments. I posted three stories in the last seven days. Two of them are four pages long, one in LW (Unwanted Memories) on 12/31 and my first in I/T (A Very Long Engagement) on 1/6.

Here are a breakdown of their stats as they stand right now:


[TR]
[TD]Title[/TD]
[TD]Views[/TD]
[TD]Rating[/TD]
[TD]Vote Count[/TD]
[TD]Comments[/TD]
[TD]Favorites[/TD]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD]A Very Long Engagement[/TD]
[TD]20K[/TD]
[TD]4.67[/TD]
[TD]386[/TD]
[TD]17[/TD]
[TD]57[/TD]
[/TR]
[TR]
[TD]Unwanted Memories[/TD]
[TD]38K[/TD]
[TD]4.66[/TD]
[TD]3.4K[/TD]
[TD]250[/TD]
[TD]176[/TD]
[/TR]


Same rating, basically. The LW handicap probably means if I'd written something that was similarly popular in another category, it would have scored higher, but it's hard to quantify that. I will say that a large number of comments on Unwanted Memories said, basically, "this is the best thing you've written here," including from other writers whose opinions I respect. The comments for AVLE were mostly complimentary, but largely not on that level of effusiveness.

Double the number of views is pretty much as expected; one has been out for a week longer than the other, and it's in a genre I have (I think) a good rep in. Favorites follows similarly along with that; those tend to be exposure-related regardless of category. But the two things that I found really interesting were the votes count/views disparity and the comments/views disparity. In the case of the former, it's about a fivefold disparity. In terms of comments/views, it's an order of magnitude!

The comments themselves are also illuminating. For AVLE, there were three comments that said something like "the anal ruined it." There was one that said "It's NTH's usual quality, but I only read a page, because I don't like incest stories," and then another one saying "what kind of idiot comes into the incest section if they don't want to read incest stories?" The rest were very positive, with many of them asking for more stories about Matt and Sam.

On Unwanted Memories... I'm not doing a detailed breakdown of 250 comments. But they were wildly disparate: people saying that I had written the story wrong, that the MC shouldn't have forgiven his wife, that I was a beta cuck, that they hated the anal, that the MC should have banged the friendly doctor instead, deep analyses of the themes, straight up attaboys, just a huge mix of stuff. There was the 1* contingent, the ones that said "I hate that you made me like a reconciliation story," the ones that said that I was clearly lying about how the actual end of the story went (because of course she would cheat again and/or the MC would be unhappy and/or the wife had faked her memory loss). It's a wild ride, y'all. Go check it out if you want to have some fun.

I tend to write the "things have gone wrong in this marriage, here's how the people involved deal with it" subgenre in LW. I've dipped my toes into BTB and (sort of) RAAC, but mostly just "flawed people doing human things after other flawed people wrong them" stories. And I get a LOT of comments. Looking at the other LW stories that are similar in style, getting 70-100 comments in the first week isn't uncommon, regardless of what type of story is written. And I think it's because it isn't broken down by subgenre.

If I was concerned about rating, other than as a poor metric for how I get reluctant readers to accept challenging themes and outcomes through (hopefully) decent writing, I'd definitely prefer to have it broken out. But because I like comments, to find out how people react to what I've written? Gimme that Thunderdome.
 
Check out my story ‘you only think you’re in control’ and the over 300 comments. They’re a riot.
I will do just that, I love reading them idiots thinking that when they write something on the anonymous internet it actually MATTERS anything. Poor people :) They are venting their sexual frustration being in LW and that's all that is. They should rather find some p. or d. to fuck with in real life and... well. Get a life, actually!

My latest story posted to Loving Wives yesterday. It was an ending to the open-ending story "JUST ONCE... IF YOU DON'T MIND?", where the original author almost two years ago invited other to write their own sequels (which I just did).

To underscore my opinion that commenter are being entertained, the latest comment on "JUST ONCE... DAMAGING CHOICES" (described as a sequesl) is: "
When is this story ever going to end? Do we really need to continue reading different variations of such an old story? Stop beating a dead horse and write something new. Otherwise an hack can do this."


This reader clicked on the story KNOWING it was a sequel to an older one, merely to post that comment. With so many stories posted daily to LitE, that commenter still felt the draw of hating yet another story he knew he would hate!
How "sweet" of him to write that. And you? Punish him with righting....... even more! :D
It's just the local color of LW. Nothing new under the sun ;)
 
How "sweet" of him to write that. And you? Punish him with writing....... even more! :D
It's just the local color of LW. Nothing new under the sun ;)
If clicking on stories to leave hateful comments and 1-ratings is their form of entertainment, ... then the measure of success in the LW category is how low a score we can get and how many hateful comments we receive.

The lower the score and more hateful comments means we have emotionally touched those readers and gave them what they wanted!
 
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