How to handle odd feedback

[njailarhee]

So I just got a new story approved and for the first time I'm getting feedback, almost 90% of it is talking about the size of a woman's breasts.
the comments found here:
http://www.literotica.com/members/comments_moderate.php?id=427936

Oh here is the story link http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=427936
My issue is I am a 40G I am describing myself, why is my story unbelievable becuase I have large breasts? Almost no one commented on the story just the breast size.

How would you react?

 

[bellassecret]

Would you be able to post a link to your story instead of the one you provided? That one just throws me to my members area info, not yours.

 

[_Lynn_]

Her story is here.


Your mistake was in giving a size at all. There are words to describe the breast. Use them.

Consider it a lesson learned in what not to do when you write your next piece.

 

[bellassecret]

Her story is here.


Your mistake was in giving a size at all. There are words to describe the breast. Use them.

Consider it a lesson learned in what not to do when you write your next piece.

Thanks for the link MistressLynn

I have to agree with MistressLynn here. And I've got something to add to the bra-size thing too.

I'm from Australia. Here, our bra sizes are different, just like our clothing sizes are different. 40G does not give me an image of what your character's appearance is like. All it is to me is some numbers and a letter. It doesn't mean anything to me at all. If you want to describe breast size, I would prefer a verbal description, not a bra size.

 

[_Lynn_]

Thanks for the link MistressLynn

I have to agree with MistressLynn here. And I've got something to add to the bra-size thing too.

I'm from Australia. Here, our bra sizes are different, just like our clothing sizes are different. 40G does not give me an image of what your character's appearance is like. All it is to me is some numbers and a letter. It doesn't mean anything to me at all. If you want to describe breast size, I would prefer a verbal description, not a bra size.

No problem.

You brought up an excellent point about sizes being different in other countries too.

 

[Fatwa_Morgana]

I agree. Nobody looks at a lady and thinks, "Hey, those are 42 DD boobies!" They look at them and think, "those are luscious, pendulous, tasty, grabable boobies!" Discuss them in terms of how observers actually feel, not in clinical, measurable terms.

Just my opinion, of course!....Morgana

 

[njailarhee]

Well,

this story was written when I was still an exotic dancer and I would put my stats in there becuase most of my readers were people that saw me dance.

I guess I should have wrote a little note in the beginging.

 

[_Lynn_]

Well,

this story was written when I was still an exotic dancer and I would put my stats in there becuase most of my readers were people that saw me dance.

I guess I should have wrote a little note in the beginging.

Well,

I somehow doubt many of the readers here saw you dance, or cared that you did for that matter.

Putting the stats in will always get you comments. A little note at the beginning won't make any difference. The readers want to 'see' what boobs look like, and that happens with descriptive words.

 

[PrincessErin]

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