how do you feel about pee?

[Boxlicker101]

Alright. . .Here it is. You can decide for yourself if you think it's too much.

“I have to piss.” She groaned.
“Maybe if you wouldn’t drink so . . . ” I stopped suddenly as I watched her pull her slacks and knickers down around her ankles, squat in the sand with her legs spread apart, and release a stream of pee onto the beach.
“Oh my god, that’s the best feeling ever.” She chimed emphatically. She’s not one for modesty, Valentine.

I see nothing at all objectionable in that. In fact, it is a good way to show that particular character trait. If this is all the pissing there is, it is certainly not a fetish story. Even if you, personally, do like to watch a woman pissing, your story is not about that.

 

[Guest]

 

[Pure]

Tiger concedes,

It would be more accurate to say that I do have somewhat of a fetish,

Ok, glad you've let that loose

but I did not write a fetish story. Or, you might prefer the analogy, "I'm Bi, but currently I'm dating a woman."

Actually I prefer the analogy, "Yes, I'm gay, but I writing a completely straight erotica romance story, with just an incident of two of the male lead butt fucking a friend, which is totally in accord with the story development."

 

[tiger_smurf]

So, Pure. Why are you such a homo-phobe?

 

[Boxlicker101]

So, Pure. Why are you such a homo-phobe?

Hey, Tiger. Don'r worry about Pure. This is one person who posts here just to start rancorous arguements.

 

[Pure]

Thanks box, happy easter to you too.

(I prefer 'impassioned' to 'rancorous' in argument; either better than 'love your av.')

 

[Guest]

Thanks box, happy easter to you too.

(I prefer 'impassioned' to 'rancorous' in argument; either better than 'love your av.')

I always love yours, Pure. It makes such a statement.

Lou

P.S. Dontcha just love my bunny ears? You know you do, come on, admit it to yourself.

 

[Pure]

Hi lou,

Unfortunately, due to the male phallus (etc.) exhibition problem, and the presence of kids, I have to keep all av's turned off; but always enjoy the sparkling discussion of them!!

 

[Guest]

Hi lou,

Unfortunately, due to the male phallus (etc.) exhibition problem, and the presence of kids, I have to keep all av's turned off; but always enjoy the sparkling discussion of them!!

I'm sure you find it highly enjoyable.

I have AV's turned off during the day, but always know I'm in for a real treat in the evenings - once the kids are safely tucked up in bed. Can't get enough cock pics. Seriously! Ok, maybe that's a bit OTT, and I'd much rather see the real thing, but some of them do make me laugh.

Lou

 

[Boxlicker101]

Katie, I always like your AV's. I would post a pic of myself but I am just homely, and would turn everybody off. I prefer using animated shots anyhow.

 

[Pure]

Hi lou,

cock, pussy, fuck, I think the pictures should abound. somewhere. i just wish there was an area of literotica that could be viewed at work or around kids. text only. NOT including the partying teens spread {?} shots on lit's home page. Oh, and NOT including box's homely mug with pubic hairs stuck to it

perhaps you can find a suitable av for me; a evil troll under a bridge, perhaps?

 

[Guest]

Pure,

Now there's a challenge!

I'll have a little scout around later and see what I can find.

I completely agree about wanting a "text only" option for Lit. But, I guess it's the banners that bring in the money.

Lou

P.S. Cheers, Box.