How do I get my story to be viewable?

Hobofetus

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Let me first start by apologizing if i posted this in the wrong area, as I am new to the boards.

I recently finished polishing up a story for submission, submitted it and it still is "pending". I am just curious as to what that means, and as to how long these "pending" stories usually take to make it through.

thanks in advance for any insight you guys might give me.
 
It depends on what format you submitted your story in. If you copy/pasted it in the text box (which would make it .txt) then it's automatically processed by a bot first, then viewed by a person. It usually takes two days. My boyfriend just posted three at once and it only took two days.

If you submit it in another format (.doc or .rtf) then it has to be converted manually by a person and then posted. That takes considerably longer. Usually 3-4 days, depending on how many you submit at a time.

And welcome, by the way. :) I hope that helped.
 
It depends, but usually 3 -7 days.
If there are a lot of stories in the queue it will take longer, as they like to have about the same number of stories come out each day.
If you're a new writer here it tends to take longer than established writers.
If there is a themed contest going on (there isn't right now) any stories for the contest get fast tracked ahead of all others. Contest entries usually go up next day and sometimes within hours of submission.
Poems also usually go up next day.
 
Much thanks to all those that replied. I hope it gets posted sooon as I am rediculously anxious for feedback.
 
Much thanks to all those that replied. I hope it gets posted sooon as I am rediculously anxious for feedback.

Nothing to add on timing, it's all been said.

If you really want feedback, make sure 'Allow Public Comments' is checked once your story is up - and post a link here so us lazybones can go take a look.
 
Another thing, if you push the pending button, a lot of the time the story goes back to the back of the queue. So patience is it's own reward. ;)
 
Hooray! approved!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=383315&page=1

check it out and let me know what you think!

What I think is that this story, featuring a sixteen year old boy named Walter and a mother named Patty, was posted by John Doelman on storiesonline in 1999. The title there was "Tale of Two Mothers."

thanks in advance for any insight you guys might give me.

If you're John Doelman, you might be better off using that name, or at least explaining in an introductory note that you posted that story under that name, so that nobody accuses you of plagiarism (like all the comments to your story have so far).

If you're not John Doelman, you're a scumbag.
 
Scumbag eh? dang, those are harsh words.

Heres the deal.

I had no idea that someone else wrote this story, but i found it on my older brothers computer, along with approximetaly 9 other chapters. there was no author listed he is also a writer, albiet a little less perverted than I am but i was surprised to see this on his computer and thought it deserved to be posted.

I really dont appreciate being called "lowlife, and scumbag" when i didnt know, and all i was trying to do was pass on what i thought was an excellent story.

also. who is walter and patty? and how am i able to go in and change the author note to properly give this John Doleman guy credit?
 
Scumbag eh? dang, those are harsh words.

Heres the deal.

I had no idea that someone else wrote this story, but i found it on my older brothers computer, along with approximetaly 9 other chapters. there was no author listed he is also a writer, albiet a little less perverted than I am but i was surprised to see this on his computer and thought it deserved to be posted.

I really dont appreciate being called "lowlife, and scumbag" when i didnt know, and all i was trying to do was pass on what i thought was an excellent story.

also. who is walter and patty? and how am i able to go in and change the author note to properly give this John Doleman guy credit?

You now know you have committed plagiarism. The only honorable solution for you is to ask the site to delete the story asap.
 
Scumbag eh? dang, those are harsh words.

Heres the deal.

I had no idea that someone else wrote this story, but i found it on my older brothers computer, along with approximetaly 9 other chapters. there was no author listed he is also a writer, albiet a little less perverted than I am but i was surprised to see this on his computer and thought it deserved to be posted.

I really dont appreciate being called "lowlife, and scumbag" when i didnt know, and all i was trying to do was pass on what i thought was an excellent story.

also. who is walter and patty? and how am i able to go in and change the author note to properly give this John Doleman guy credit?

No, here's the deal: It's illegal to "pass on" someone else's intellectual property. Pretending it is your own makes it even worse, but even if you did give the author credit, you'd be in the wrong.

I also don't believe you were only trying to pass on a story. You were clearly asking for feedback. You were trying to pass this off as your own until you were caught, which happened pretty quickly. If this really was on your brother's computer, why on earth would you feel it was okay to post this without his permission? Didn't you think he would have posted it himself if he wanted it out there?

I'm calling major BS, and I'm seconding the "scumbag".
 
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thanks fiery jen, i didnt realize trying to correct my own error was soooo terrible.

you would think apologizing and trying to do the right thing now is frowned upon.

if you read the post i made, there was no author on the title! and yes, I am going to ask my brother if he would like to post incest stories on an erotic website that i visit without determining if it was even written by him. ARE YOU RETARDED?!? Thats just asking for embarrasment. i figured id post it, and then if it was popular, i would MAYBE, just MAYBE even bring the issue up with him.

In the spirit of NOT being a total D-bag (like a large number of people on this site apparently) i would like to thank elfin for at least not being one of those.

who do i contact to have this removed?
 
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thanks fiery jen, i didnt realize trying to correct my own error was soooo terrible.

In the spirit of NOT being a total D-bag (like a large number of people on this site apparently) i would like to thank elfin for at least not being one of those.

who do i contact to have this removed?

Writing a PM to Laurel should work the fastest. Since this is a plagiarism issue I imagine she'll probably get to it very soon.

Honey, you weren't trying to correct an error, you were trying to cover your own ass. I'm glad you at least have the decency to remove the story.

If you want to prove me wrong, instead of insulting me I suggest addressing some of the inconsistencies I pointed out in my earlier post.
 
thanks fiery jen, i didnt realize trying to correct my own error was soooo terrible.

you would think apologizing and trying to do the right thing now is frowned upon.

if you read the post i made, there was no author on the title! and yes, I am going to ask my brother if he would like to post incest stories on an erotic website that i visit without determining if it was even written by him. ARE YOU RETARDED?!? Thats just asking for embarrasment. i figured id post it, and then if it was popular, i would MAYBE, just MAYBE even bring the issue up with him.

In the spirit of NOT being a total D-bag (like a large number of people on this site apparently) i would like to thank elfin for at least not being one of those.

who do i contact to have this removed?

Nice edit to your post there.

Where's the apology, by the way? I haven't seen one so far.

Just because there was no author "on the title" (whatever that means) made you think that the document had created itself from thin air? Obviously someone wrote this, and that someone is the only one who gets to determine where this story can or cannot be published. I'm not sure how it's possible for someone to wander through the world without even getting a basic clue about the issues of copyright and intellectual ownership. Whether this document belonged to your brother or not does not matter in this case, you'd still need his permission to post this anywhere if he was the author.

So what was your plan if people did like this story? Then it would suddenly be alright to talk this over with your brother, because he couldn't possibly be upset about the fact that you took something he created without his permission, passed it off as yours and put it on the internet, where you would collect praises for it? And the issue of incest would magically dissolve into thin air?

Asking me whether have mental retardation is pretty rich coming from someone who's done all of the above and sees nothing wrong with his actions.
 
Nice edit to your post there.

Where's the apology, by the way? I haven't seen one so far.

Just because there was no author "on the title" (whatever that means) made you think that the document had created itself from thin air? Obviously someone wrote this, and that someone is the only one who gets to determine where this story can or cannot be published. I'm not sure how it's possible for someone to wander through the world without even getting a basic clue about the issues of copyright and intellectual ownership. Whether this document belonged to your brother or not does not matter in this case, you'd still need his permission to post this anywhere if he was the author.

So what was your plan if people did like this story? Then it would suddenly be alright to talk this over with your brother, because he couldn't possibly be upset about the fact that you took something he created without his permission, passed it off as yours and put it on the internet, where you would collect praises for it? And the issue of incest would magically dissolve into thin air?

Asking me whether have mental retardation is pretty rich coming from someone who's done all of the above and sees nothing wrong with his actions.

Most obviously the document WASNT created from thin air, but like I have said NUMEROUS TIMES, there was no additonal author on the story so i assumed that my brother had gotten the story from somewhere, or written it himself. If you look at the date of birth you will see that i myself am 22 and am no longer living with my family and neither is my brother. i have his old computer and randomly came across this story a while back.

As you will notice, i said that i would MAYBE even bring the incest issue up with him. Those chances are incredibly slim, as i dont want to embarrass him, or myself.

What i did was wrong, and i am trying to rectify that in every way possible. though i havent literally typed out the words I AM SORRY. i would think that you would at least be able to see that i am doing what i can to fix this problem and have the story removed. I hope you can get off you high horse and see it for what it was. A MISTAKE THAT IS TRYING TO GET FIXED.
 
Most obviously the document WASNT created from thin air, but like I have said NUMEROUS TIMES, there was no additonal author on the story so i assumed that my brother had gotten the story from somewhere, or written it himself. If you look at the date of birth you will see that i myself am 22 and am no longer living with my family and neither is my brother. i have his old computer and randomly came across this story a while back.

As you will notice, i said that i would MAYBE even bring the incest issue up with him. Those chances are incredibly slim, as i dont want to embarrass him, or myself.

What i did was wrong, and i am trying to rectify that in every way possible. though i havent literally typed out the words I AM SORRY. i would think that you would at least be able to see that i am doing what i can to fix this problem and have the story removed. I hope you can get off you high horse and see it for what it was. A MISTAKE THAT IS TRYING TO GET FIXED.

As I have said numerous times, whether your brother wrote this story of got it from elsewhere doesn't matter, and neither does it matter whether the author's name was or was not on the document. You still broke a law, genius, and I can't believe that you would be dense enough to think that taking a story that wasn't yours and posting it on the internet would be perfectly alright.

You've already embarrassed yourself plenty, mostly by being incredibly obnoxious about the entire issue. You did something that was wrong, people here called you on it, and you took offense at being called a scumbag (um... again, you broke a law, and on top of that you tried to mislead us by pretending the story was yours... how are you surprised that people are irritated?). Your attitude never suggested anything even remotely close to an apology, and yet you have the audacity to suggest that I should have read between the lines that you were actually terribly sorry about what you've done. Apologies aren't implied, and what you're doing is a cop-out.

That you're trying to get the story removed isn't some awesome gesture on your part, it is the absolute minimum that you should be doing right now. It does not excuse your lousy attitude and calling people names because they are legitimately offended.
 
You've already embarrassed yourself plenty, mostly by being incredibly obnoxious about the entire issue.

aside from defending attacks on my personal character, would you please point out the examples of how i have been obnoxious about this whole issue. I have done nothing but explain why this issue arose, and have asked how i can rectify this. while you have just consistantly gone off on me while I am trying to fix this.

You still broke a law, genius, and I can't believe that you would be dense enough to think that taking a story that wasn't yours and posting it on the internet would be perfectly alright.

please read this again.

What i did was wrong, and i am trying to rectify that in every way possible

and also

That you're trying to get the story removed isn't some awesome gesture on your part, it is the absolute minimum that you should be doing right now.

then please tell me oh wise and all knowing jen, what should I be doing?

and for the record my attitude only became lousy when you started freaking out on me for trying to (ONCE AGAIN!), rectify a mistake that was made.
 
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aside from defending attacks on my personal character, would you please point out the examples of how i have been obnoxious about this whole issue. I have done nothing but explain why this issue arose, and have asked how i can rectify this. while you have just consistantly gone off on me while I am trying to fix this.



please read this again.
I meant while you were doing it, genius, not after it was already pointed out to you that you were in the wrong.
I really dont appreciate being called "lowlife, and scumbag" when i didnt know, and all i was trying to do was pass on what i thought was an excellent story.
That's pretty obnoxious coming from someone who just broke a law. "You're right, and I'm sorry" would have been the way to go, instead of objecting to the way you're being treated. In Germany there's a saying: "Unwissenheit schuetzt vor Strafe nicht", which means, applied to this case, that claiming ignorance about copyright doesn't excuse what you did. If you actually felt bad about this, you'd have made it a point to apologize (instead of "implying" it, which is such bullshit).
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then please tell me oh wise and all knowing jen, what should I be doing?

and for the record my attitude only became lousy when you started freaking out on me for trying to (ONCE AGAIN!), rectify a mistake that was made.

I wasn't freaking out on you (you're the one consistently using caps, in case that escaped you), but I was calling you out on an inconsistent excuse that was either a lie you made up to save face or complete and utter stupidity. Fact is, you did not know who this story belonged to, and yet you thought it was a good idea to pass it off as yours and put it on the internet. If this is actually what happened, I don't understand why you're not more embarrassed about being that dense. This isn't even supposed to be an insult - it's a direct conclusion following from the circumstances as you have told them.

Also, the reason for my posts isn't you trying to rectify a mistake (which I hope you've done by now) but your unapologetic, lousy attitude about it.

Considering this, I think a humble "You're right, I'm infinitely sorry about doing this, my apologies to having subjected you all to this" and then a healthy dose of shutting the hell up would have been appropriate.
 
those were some great examples of me being obnoxious. oh wait, you didnt give any.

My attitude has never been lousy. As soon as i found out how to fix the problem, i contacted the Mods to delete the story.

CAPITALS ARE FOR THE SAKE OF EMPHASIS NOT TO SHOW THAT SOMEONE IS ANGRY.

You Jen, are ugly both inside and out, and I hope someday someone is able to get around your incredibly dense head and pull out the sharp pointy stick that appears to be so deeply lodged up your ass.

Mods please delete this thread.
 
those were some great examples of me being obnoxious. oh wait, you didnt give any.

My attitude has never been lousy. As soon as i found out how to fix the problem, i contacted the Mods to delete the story.

CAPITALS ARE FOR THE SAKE OF EMPHASIS NOT TO SHOW THAT SOMEONE IS ANGRY.

You Jen, are ugly both inside and out, and I hope someday someone is able to get around your incredibly dense head and pull out the sharp pointy stick that appears to be so deeply lodged up your ass.

Mods please delete this thread.

Capitals are generally considered shouting on message boards. Bolding is for emphasis.

I'm not sure whether you're trying to be pathetic or whether that's just a side effect. Someone who thinks it's perfectly fine to steal another's work and doesn't understand why that upsets people tells me I'm dense. Someone who calls me retarded tells me I'm ugly on the inside (Do you even know how offensive that is to people who are actually mentally retarded? Obviously you have no idea). Someone who has no clue what I could possibly look like tells me I'm ugly on the outside.

Yeah, way to go there genius, you've really showed me. :rolleyes:

And as I said previously, it's pretty damn obnoxious to gloss over apologizing after what you did. Those should have been the first words out of your mouth. Instead you get pissed off at those that are legitimately offended. That's obnoxious and completely uncalled for.

And the mods aren't going to delete this thread. Tough luck there.
 
Nor should the mods delete this thread. It's a great warning to plagarists, and a good showcase of a selfish jerk.

Jen, if you need reassurance, I have always thought you're beautiful. Still do. :)
 
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