How do I describe this?

[DarkLover]

I posted this on another Lit board and someone suggesting it might be a question to post here.

I like to write erotica for my wife and I need some guidance from a woman's point of view. (I don't know if this question fits better here or on the "Story Idea" board.)

Ladies, in your own erotic terms, how would you describe the feeling and the emotion of a penis entering you? As a guy I can obviously describe it from a male view, but a female perspective would help.

Thanks.

Darklover

 

[McKenna]

I'll take a stab at it:

It's like an invasion, but a welcome one. It's a feeling of being filled up; it's like without him inside of me, I am incomplete, but with him inside of me, I am filled, and more than just physically. Usually it's a physical representation of the emotion I already feel for this man; a physical joining of bodies representing the emotional connection we share. His possession of me, and my submission to him, is indicative of the relationship we have; we are most vulnerable in this moment, but also the most connected which makes it a powerful act indeed.

 

[Colleen Thomas]

I am not sure you will get a lot of replies to this. It is a personal question after all, but there are several very good female writers here. You might try giving a few of their stories a read, as I am sure they each describe the act differently.

Off the top of my head I would suggest stories by Tatelou, English Lady, Svenskaflicka, Cloudy, Wishful Thinking, etc.

A few minutes browsing the threads here at the Ah will give you any number of lady writers. You can probaly get multiple descriptions of penetration and the feelings invovled by reading a few stories.

In general, the answers you get will probably varry from woman to woman and as far as emotion, that may varry wildlin from situation to situation witht he same woman.

-Colly

 

[impressive]

Yeah on the filling part. I'm not into the possession or the cosmic bond kinda thing. The romantic side of sex just goes right by me. It's the passion that's the draws -- the intensity. Anyway, it's more of the satisfaction of being touched/stroked on the inside in complement to what's going on outside -- if that makes any damned sense.

The same satisfaction can be obtained with a skillfully-weilded toy/implement -- although flesh is preferable inside (just as tongue is preferable outside).

 

[Guest]

Hi Darklover!

Ok, I'll give it a go...

It is a union, a complete union of lovers. There is nothing more intense than him pushing his hard cock deep inside me. The actual feelings as he does this vary, depending on how wet I am, or if he has already entered me with something else (his fingers, his tongue, a toy, and so on).

Ok, I'm imagining it now and will attempt to describe it to you... I am bent over, he's stood behind me, between my legs. My pussy is throbbing, tingling, pulsating, eager to be fucked. I feel the head of his cock touch my labia, a hiss leaves my gritted teeth. He pushes, gently at first, working his way in. I feel his entire thickness fill me, stretch me, rub on my inner wetness, increasing all sensation down there. I feel him push deeper, harder, and I push back at him, wanting him to be completely inside me; to suck his entire length into my needy cunt. Right at that moment, I feel nothing else. There is no other sensation anywhere else in my body - it is all concentrated in that one small place.

It isn't just a physical feeling. I mean, it is, but the intensity of what I feel does depend on my emotions and how I am being fucked. If it is as described, dirty, fully intense and incredibly passionate, that is the ultimate, to me. It is overwhelming and the best feeling I know. I am his, he takes me - that's what it comes down to.


That was harder than I thought it would be!

Lou

Edited to add a P.S. Colly:

 

[English Lady]

*blushes* Aww thanks for the mention Colleen, that has made my day!


Ok so go on i'll have a stab at this (pun intended) I will describe a moment,every time I am entered I feel different emotions, feelings etc depending on the situation, the position and the mood.

He has teased me for what seems like hours. My skin is electrified with his touch, every single nerve ending in my body is tingling with sensuality.

My pussy is wet-no- it is beyond wet now. It is soaking, sopping wet. He teases me with the very tip of that cock, making me wish i could entrap him with my cunt lips and suck him inside me...

As he feeds that cock into me I feel myself opening up, my lips stretching around him, my pussy widening to accomodate his with. I feel every single one of my electrified nerve endings throbbing, those at the tips throbbing the most, my nipples, my toes, my cunt all throbbing as if an electrical current has been finished with the insertion of this rod.

As the cock sinks further into me I feel the delicous pressure of being filled. My open, empty pussy is being filled and it feels so good, so right, so damn sexy!

It is as if i become whole, satisfied and at the same time desperate for more satisfaction.

It is so much more than the physical. Having an intimate part of a man slipped inside my most intimate place joins us. Makes us one. Even if it is only for a short amount of time we are two halves that fit together and become one.

 

[dr_mabeuse]

God, you women get me hot!

Honest to God: McKenna, Lou, EL, why don't I read more of that kind of stuff in porn stories? What you say is so beautiful and yet so incredibly erotic. That's someof the most erotic stuff I've ever read by a woman.

God love you! Where's the kleenex?

---dr.M. (just

 

[Guest]

God, you women get me hot!

Honest to God: McKenna, Lou, EL, why don't I read more of that kind of stuff in porn stories? What you say is so beautiful and yet so incredibly erotic. That's someof the most erotic stuff I've ever read by a woman.

God love you! Where's the kleenex?

---dr.M. (just

WOW!

Now that's what I call a reaction!

Thank you so much. Talk about give me confidence in my writing.

Yep, EL and McK, yours were very hot.

Lou

 

[Alex De Kok]

I'm with the doc! Nice work, ladies. Nice work? Heck, excuse me while I wipe up the drool. . .

Is this what they mean when they say, 'write about what you know'?

Alex

 

[English Lady]

Why thank you kind gentle men Dr M (I do love it when your typing goes to pot ) and Alex....watch where you're dripping!!


*hands around the tissues*


Yours was damn good too Lou...and Mckennas...actually I was worried how I'd follow them both *L*


I hope Dark Lover likes what he's got

 

[cloudy]

I sorta tried to answer Dark Lover when he posted his question elsewhere, but I'll try it again (although you're right Lou, it is tough):

The anticipation I feel takes my breath, when I feel him start to enter me. I want him now!

My pussy wraps around him, grasping him tightly, and pulling him in me at the same time. I push against him, wanting him to fill me completely, and I can feel every bit of him inside, sliding into place. It's as if something has been missing inside me, and it isn't anymore.

The first push is wonderful, completing me, finally, and I have to be still, just for a moment, feeling him fill me, before I want more.

 

[Guest]

... how would you describe the feeling and the emotion of a penis entering you?

Have you asked the penis?

Sorry, could not resist. Maladroit phrasing always interrupts a reading for me. Gauche sentences nearly make me hiccup.

I would only add to the above spot on descriptions how my cunt feels just before penetration. That is, if I am fully aroused, I "feel" the inside of my cunt throbbing as if it by itself (i.e., unconnected to me) is dying to be filled. I love that feeling, that desire for penetration. Then of course actually feeling "filled up" is the best bit outside of orgasm. After he comes I like him to stay in and shrink up inside me so that his cock slides out like a tiny baby. Finally I love the leaking out of his ejaculation combined with mine. The whole act of sexual intercourse is brilliant drama.

Perdita

 

[Wicked-N-Erotic]

As these other fine ladies have said it so well, it does depend on mood, emotions and position. I will also add it depends on the size of the penis also.


Even if there has been plenty of foreplay the feeling of the cock finally making its entrance is amazing. There is no substitute for the real thing. If the penetration is slow it is filled with so much more feeling. I'll give it a go...

When the tip of his cock touchs the swollen outer lips it causes me to hold my breath, waiting, anticipating the moment he pushes past the wetness clinging to the labia. My whole body wants to draw him into me, my hands caress his back and ass, wanting to pull him deeper but yet wanting to let him enter as slowly as possible to make the feeling last as long as possible. My heart thuds in my chest, my breathing becomes shallow and raspy as his cock pushes through the tight, hungry mouth. I feel the hard ridge that runs just under the head of his cock as it slowly pushes along the slick walls of my pussy, opening me an inch at a time. I squeeze down on him as he pushes in deeper, intensifying the feeling of that ridge as it rubs along, making it feel thicker inside of me. I feel stretched and full. Satisfied but yet unsatisfied, wanting more, needing more. Then as he slowly pulls back I can feel the entire lenghth of him as he leaves me feeling empty with each inch that is withdrew. My pussy clenches and pulls at him trying to hold his cock inside of me for as long as I can. The wetness that coats his cock slides slowly and warm down the crack of my ass as he pulls out so that only the very tip is resting, pulsating against the stretched opening. I can feel the heat of his body against my pelvis then as if it was only suddenly there and had not been the whole time and if he with draws completely the cool air that licks across my wet lips, making me shudder and raise my hips to him in a silent plea to fill me, complete me once again. The smell of sex that fills the room drives me farther, igniting every nerve ending in my body, causing my clit to throb with the knowing that he will soon be pushing into me again. His cock feels hard yet soft and velvety sheathed inside of my pussy. If he pushes in deep and holds still I can feel his cock twitching and throbbing.



Not as good as the previous ladies but I gave it my best shot, hope I was a bit of help also.

I'm gonna have to save this to my notes for future stories......got myself all hot and bothered

Wicked

 

[amicus]

There should be a few who exhibit a mild curiosity as to how the ignorant neoconistic misogynist amicus might view and deal with the situation described by thread starter Darklover.....

This writer of erotic stories was mildly surprised at a few of the previous posts that indicated 'submission', acquiescence and inplied surrender in the description of the female response to heterosexual intercourse.

To begin with, a clinical research in terms of the physical mechanics of the act is necessary for accuracy.

Although one would most likely never use the words in a story, once should know the location and function of the labia majora and the labia minora, the clitoral fold and the clitoris itself which, unlike its male counterpoint, play no functional role in the female sex organ other than to provide a pleasureable feeling.

The vulva or vaginal orifice itself and the sheathlike passage of the vagina leading to the uterus should be understood in terms of the number of nerve endings and engorgement that occurs during stimulation. The actual size of the vagina and the distance from the vulva to the uterine opening should also be known, in general terms, as it varies with the individual.

It is also important, I think, to recognize, that like the male, female stimulation is often sublime and automatic or instinctual, that is to say, as a scent of perfume may bring on an erection in the male, appropriate stimulation, intentional or serendiptitous can bring the female to a receptive stage.

Although, again, not used in the actual writing of an erotic story, for your wife, or for any reader, I think for an understanding of female or male response and feelings during the sexual act, that a basic assumption must be acknowledged.

Every event that occurs, physical, psychological, both conscious awareness and subconscious, everything that happens, does so for one reason and one reason only: 'to get the semen in the general location of the ovum.'

An understanding that 'nature rules', that the innate drive to procreate is at the very heart and soul of sexual intercourse, will give a better grasp on both the mechanics and the meaning.

For instance, during an uterine orgasm, photographed (by a detached and objective observer, I'm sure) shows the opening of the uterus actually dipping down into the pool of semen at the vaginal termination point to better facilitate transporting the semen to the promised land.

One also needs to take in consideration the cycle of ovulation of the female. During that cycle, there is a period of fertility in which conception can occur. This does not pass unnoticed by the body, although it may not be obvious to the individual.

It is that period of time that makes the female of the species totally unique in that she actively seeks a male. Well known in the animal world, few realize that the pheremones and heightened sensitivity to all stimuli affect the human female as well. And, like the animal world, the female, for the most part, is unable to 'rationally' control that desire.

Which is why many societies exercise firm control over the female; however also provides writers and poets unlimited resources concerning the fickle and promiscuous who succumb to their inner drives. Ain't it wunnerful?

The 'stretching and filling' (as mentioned earlier) of the vagina by the penis (or toy) is a primal memory, innate, of the birth canal being 'filled and stretched' and 'feeling whole, as one...' again as mentioned earlier, as the fulfillment of sexual intercourse when vaginal delivery is accomplished.

We poor males are just tools for the fulfillment of nature's design for the female of the species.

If any one shows an interest in this rather dry exhortation, I may be persuaded to deal with further emotional and psychological aspects of sexual intercourse.

After all, while majoring in some subjects, I minored in vaginal research at four different universities and can offer a variety of observations on several hundred research subjects ages 18 to 24 in all different varieties.

absolutely amicably amicus

 

[TheEarl]

God Damn! What is with everybody writing such hot things on the baords; first the lip-to-lip thread, now this?

Seriously considering collating all of these excerpts together to make one large miasma of pure sex writing. No story, just solid description. Any objections?

The Earl

 

[impressive]

Seriously considering collating all of these excerpts together to make one large miasma of pure sex writing. No story, just solid description.

Damn - I might never leave it!

 

[Guest]

large miasma of pure sex

Sounds good to me. - Pear

 

[DarkLover]

Wow, some great answers here.

I'm good and turned on after reading some of these replies. I think my wife will love them too.

Thank you very much, ladies!

Darklover

 

[Guest]

Any objections?

The Earl

Not at all.

For Alex:

Glad to be of service, Darklover.

Lou

P.S. Amicus, blimey mate, you don't 'arf know how to get a woman good and hot.

 

[Wicked-N-Erotic]

Originally posted by TheEarl
Any objections?

None here, just make sure you let me know when it's done so I can bookmark it for future inspiration


Wicked

 

[Vincent E]

Boooinnngg!

Pant, pant, pant...someone help me out of these pants.

I'm jumping into this to get a little clarification about the throbbing women feel. Throbbing has been mentioned.

As medically as possible, please describe what part of the vulva throbs? Is it the clitoris, the labia, the vagina? Where does the throbbing actually takes place? Is it an inside feeling or an outside feeling?

Do you throb before or after your own natural lubricating juices flow?

Most importantly, if you begin to throb before penetration takes place, what can a man do to you that will absolutely torture you? Deny relief?

Does penetration relieve the throbbing or does it enhance it?

With us it is easy, the throbbing takes place in the head of the penis though there is some pulsing in the lower half of the shaft as well. One can see it throb.

I didn't know I knew so many un-dirty words for female sexual organs.

 

[cloudy]

Boooinnngg!

Pant, pant, pant...someone help me out of these pants.

I'm jumping into this to get a little clarification about the throbbing women feel. Throbbing has been mentioned.

As medically as possible, please describe what part of the vulva throbs? Is it the clitoris, the labia, the vagina? Where does the throbbing actually takes place? Is it an inside feeling or an outside feeling?

Medically? Okay - inside mostly, although my lips will swell and pulse in time with my heartbeat too. And there's an overall flush of heat, as well.

Do you throb before or after your own natural lubricating juices flow?

It starts before, with me, and that's what's starts the juices flowing. I also feel a flush, starting at my hips, working it's way up my body - delicious.

Most importantly, if you begin to throb before penetration takes place, what can a man do to you that will absolutely torture you? Deny relief?

Hmmm. Touching everywhere, not just my pussy. The inside of my thighs, right over my hipbone, my ribcage, all are extremely erotic.

Does penetration relieve the throbbing or does it enhance it?

Enhances it, definitely. There is an immediate feeling of......hard to describe, but "oh, yessssss" is as close as I can get.

 

[Guest]

Yup, Cloudy's pretty much described how it is for me, too.

Medically speaking, it must be the female equivalent of an erection. Blood rushes to the vulva, hence the throbbing, increased sensation and feeling of heat.

For me, this begins happening as soon as I get turned on. Sometimes just a word can do it, hearing someone's voice, seeing something, reading something, all of which might turn me on. Just the same as you guys, I suspect!

How the throbbing actually feels, well, it's just that: a pulsating sensation. Also, my clit and the extremities of my labia tingle.

These are not relieved by penetration, but enhanced. The only relief comes from orgasm - even then the sensations carry on for a while after. In fact, with a skilled lover, I can be held at this point for literally hours, experiencing orgasm after orgasm, then being brought to that point over and over again.

Phew!

Lou

 

[Wicked-N-Erotic]

Uh huh, Cloudy and Lou have hit the nail on the head. There isn't anything more I could add without being repetitive. Only to say this thread makes me throb

Wicked

 

[impressive]

Uh huh, Cloudy and Lou have hit the nail on the head.

I'll second that.