How did i do - First time publisher!

[rigs03]

Hi All,

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=191549

This was my first ever publication, and only the second story that I have written, so would really love some feedback, compliments and / or critism about the story from other writers that seem to know a bit more about this stuff!

Thanks
Rigs03

 

[msboy8]

I R.V.C.ed on your story. Good tale. You obviously put a lot of work into that.

 

[your_softest_touch]

i'm really new to writing as well...but i've read my fair share of naughty stories. and i thought this was really well written. great story, very sexy, and very sweet too. keep up the good work.

 

[rigs03]

i'm really new to writing as well...but i've read my fair share of naughty stories. and i thought this was really well written. great story, very sexy, and very sweet too. keep up the good work.

Thanks for that, I've been thinking of making it a kind series of these 2 characters experiencing things together, with the couple of comments to date I'm encouraged even more!

 

[rigs03]

I R.V.C.ed on your story. Good tale. You obviously put a lot of work into that.

Hi msboy8, sorry but being new to this I didn't quite understand RCV'ed, but I gathered that you enjoyed it. It took me about 3 days all up, so not a lot of work I wouldn't say.

Am encouraged to write more though

THanks for the feedback

 

[wyldblyss]

Thanks for that, I've been thinking of making it a kind series of these 2 characters experiencing things together, with the couple of comments to date I'm encouraged even more!

I think a series would be a great idea.

 

[rigs03]

thanks for the feedback, have started planning on the series now, starting at the beginning wherethey first meet and moving through.

Any suggestions on possible scenarios?