House Wives

[Screaming Grace]

The Estate

A brand new housing estate is built on the edge of a city. mostly it fills up with the up and coming rich set, at first it is all happiness all over the estate, friendships start to form and then routines start to show them selves (a bit like the Stepford wives except without the cyborg type brain washing.)

The men go of to play golf each weekend and the women are left to there own devices more and more the women get bored with there lives. It seems that all they are doing is looking after the houses and gardens or having Tupperware party’s or playing bridge some belong to the local gym club and the women meet up to chat about there lives and how mundane life has become.

As a joke one of the women suggest that they open up a brothel to get some action as the men in there lives just seem to be one bang wonders and these young women want more from sex than just there men getting there own jollies.

As the weeks pass the idea of there own brothel makes its way around the estate and more an more women get interested in the idea, jointly they club together to put a deposit on a property in an area across town and work decorate the property and then they decide that to do the job properly they have to employ a manager.

They hold interviews and in the end decide on a woman thy hand over complete control of the business to her and she works out rosters for the women to work around there husbands habits and working life soon they have a thriving business and between the women they are earning them selves there own money and enjoying the sex

What I don’t know is how to work the idea into a story and put characters in to the story, especially as there would have to be a number of characters each with there own little part of the whole story.

Can any one help me?

Screaming Grace

 

[Chicklet]

ideas

I saw a news report a few years back about something similar (I'm reminding myself of Nascar now hehe) - this neighborhood filled with married women was hosting prostitution; after their kids were gone to school and husbands off at work, their john's would come by and screw them in their own homes. I think that this spin would work well on your idea.

Here are a few ideas I have for you - maybe only one of the characters is doing this and the other women around the estate notice and gossip about her. maybe secretly they want to be involved in the same things, and eventually ask her about it.

maybe you could do a chain story with this? it might be interesting.

Chicklet

 

[pop_54]

Hmm

Sounds a bit like the new estate down the road from here.

Could work as a story Grace, might take a bit of thought to make it believable, but hey why not.


Lovely legs by the way Chicklet.



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[Screaming Grace]

Re: Hmm

Sounds a bit like the new estate down the road from here.

Could work as a story Grace, might take a bit of thought to make it believable, but hey why not.


Lovely legs by the way Chicklet.



pops..............

I agree about Chicklet’s Legs and the rest of her body is ok with me also red heads of the world must unite to be better than the blonde’s

I wonder if it was an original idea or not, but as there are not many totally original stories around I wondered how I got this idea and my guess is that it was from the news or something.

Thanks Chicklet I don’t know how a chain story works but I will look into it, I love your idea about the gossip I would start with one couple and then slowly expand it as the story goes on, if that’s what you meant ?

Scream

 

[MsLinnet]

Hi Grace you are up early and I thought I was bad.
Love the idea, I have to agree a chain story might be the best way to go with this as I feel it will be a large project, and if you try to do it on your own you might get overwhelmed with the twists and turns but have fun with it and see what takes your fancy.

Love Linnet

 

[Un-registered]

Sorry to seem negative - I'm not. it is a good idea, but there are practical difficulties.

Premises: where is this brothel? Is it one house or do they entertain each in her own house? Might it not be better to run a call-girl service? That way the accommodation is provided by the lcient, but there is a risk of running into people you know.

Money: Does each woman keep her earnings or are they pooled.

Contact: Do they actually want men who have only heard about the 'service' cruising the estate, knocking on wrong doors? Or worse, right doors at the wrong time? Again the call-girl service with one cell-phone line that they all share would cure this.

If you are going to do a chain story, set it up with the initial characters, especially the women, defined before you start. Different men in each episode is fine, but you don't want Ophelia to be a willowy blonde in one chapter and a short fat brunette in another. She musn't live next to Goneril in one chapter and half a mile away in another. She musn't be married to Laertes in one chapter and later to Hamlet without an intervening divorce. I do this in my series of books with a file I call the "Names" file which keeps the characters' names, ages, descriptions, etc. It also has descriptions of locations, dress habits, and the chronology of events. If you want an example I can email one.

 

[Screaming Grace]

Sorry to seem negative - I'm not. it is a good idea, but there are practical difficulties.

Premises: where is this brothel? Is it one house or do they entertain each in her own house? Might it not be better to run a call-girl service? That way the accommodation is provided by the lcient, but there is a risk of running into people you know.

Money: Does each woman keep her earnings or are they pooled.

Contact: Do they actually want men who have only heard about the 'service' cruising the estate, knocking on wrong doors? Or worse, right doors at the wrong time? Again the call-girl service with one cell-phone line that they all share would cure this.

If you are going to do a chain story, set it up with the initial characters, especially the women, defined before you start. Different men in each episode is fine, but you don't want Ophelia to be a willowy blonde in one chapter and a short fat brunette in another. She musn't live next to Goneril in one chapter and half a mile away in another. She musn't be married to Laertes in one chapter and later to Hamlet without an intervening divorce. I do this in my series of books with a file I call the "Names" file which keeps the characters' names, ages, descriptions, etc. It also has descriptions of locations, dress habits, and the chronology of events. If you want an example I can email one.

You are not negative at all you have raised some points that I hadn’t thought about.

I was going with Chicklet’s Idea but I am starting at the very beginning here is the opening, but I would love your input as you come highly recommended


“Adrian Watson the name. You must be Chelsea and Paul Clark?”
“Yes that’s us, but I was expecting Grace Harrison.” Paul Clark said, not allowing his wife to say anything.

“Sorry about that Grace was called home her son has been taken ill.”
“Well she has been dealing with me and I wouldn’t like her to miss the commission just for the sake of a day or so we will come back when she is able to deal with us properly, no offence but I like her attention to detail.”

“You are doing it again aren’t you?” Chelsea said walking off into the other room with Paul running after her, after excusing his wife to the real estate agent.
“Chelsea there is nothing going on between us Grace is just friend that was over years ago, you know I love you.”
“You still look at every skirt at the tennis club and if the truth was known you and you cigar buddies have been with most of them.”

“That’s all over you know that.” Paul said trying to reassure his wife.

“I am sorry to interrupt but I have to meat another couple who are thinking of buying the house next door, Let me put your mind at rest about the commission Grace and I are in a syndicate on this estate as we are the sole agents so she will get a the same share from the sale regardless if you sign today or not, I will just let the Larson’s in next door and come back.” With that Adrian Watson turned and walked out the room shutting the door behind him. Chelsea stood by the window and watched as the man walked down the path to meat the car that had just pulled up and a leggy blonde stepped out of a large four by four.

“He’s nice. Lets look around while we are here you know that Paran Creek is going to be an exclusive estate and you know you want to live out of town, so this is ideal.”

Ok Sweetheart if you want it we will have it, and it will be great for you and the kids.”

“Kids I am not ready to have kids for a few years yet.” Taking Paul’s hand and taking him up the stairs to look at the bedrooms.

“Hello isn’t you husband joining us Mrs Larson?” Adrian said.
“No he is in Washington on business wont be back till the weekend, so this is North Bennington, Vermont?”

“Yes Paran Creek is the only estate to be built in the valley.”

"Its lovely, I saw the waterfall as I came past, what about flooding and snow I wouldn’t want to be stranded up here?”

“Flooding is not a problem the flow of the river is controlled by a reservoir 10 miles up the river, snow the main road is cleared by the state a private contractor clears the estate and looks after the gardens this is part of the service contract.”
Screaming Grace.

 

[MsLinnet]

So where am I in this story there has to be a place for a single bi woman in one of the houses I will manage the brothel for free jut to please you

Is Mrs Larson (formaly Pepper) going to have the real estate agent that would be fun and maybe the others walk in on them.
Linnet

 

[Screaming Grace]

Thanks Linnet for picking up that I had used two names for the same character it is going to be Larson’s not Pepper
this makes you post nonsensical now sorry
Grace

 

[Guest]

House wife ideas!

I have a title (but no story yet, lol) called The Girl Next Door: Secrets of a 1950s Housewife.

 

[Screaming Grace]

Re: House wife ideas!

I have a title (but no story yet, lol) called The Girl Next Door: Secrets of a 1950s Housewife.

I like the title but i wasnt think of going back in time.
Hey just thinking about it, it would be like back to the future but for adults.
Grace

 

[Guest]

I wasn't necessarily saying it would be good for your story. I was just adding in my own two cents and mentioning I was thinking along these lines as well. Mine wouldn't be a "Back to the Future", though. There would be no time travel, etc.

 

[Un-registered]

So where am I in this story there has to be a place for a single bi woman in one of the houses ...

Wouldn't it be easier for you to get married than for her to change her story?

 

[Screaming Grace]

I wasn't necessarily saying it would be good for your story. I was just adding in my own two cents and mentioning I was thinking along these lines as well. Mine wouldn't be a "Back to the Future", though. There would be no time travel, etc.

Hay run with it hope it works out let me know how it goes
Grace

 

[Screaming Grace]

Wouldn't it be easier for you to get married than for her to change her story?

You picking on me or on Linnet (Joke)
MsLinnet gets married that would be a tall story.
SG

 

[Screaming Grace]

Re: House wife ideas!

I have a title (but no story yet, lol) called The Girl Next Door: Secrets of a 1950s Housewife.

Love the AV. It's bit eyes only spooky.

SG

 

[MsLinnet]

Wouldn't it be easier for you to get married than for her to change her story?

Hay you, why should I change my life for a story what if the leggy blonde is me what if I am married to this guy but he is a jerk like most men once they realise what there dick is for.

Linnet

 

[Un-registered]

Hay you, why should I change my life for a story

Sorry, Linnet, I thought you knew that for a truly dedicated writer like SG the story is EVERYTHING. If life doesn't fit the story, it's life that has to change.

 

[MsLinnet]

Sorry, Linnet, I thought you knew that for a truly dedicated writer like SG the story is EVERYTHING. If life doesn't fit the story, it's life that has to change.

JUST MESSING WITH YOU A LITTLE

Linnet

 

[Screaming Grace]

How do you like this will it work for you Lin.

“Flooding is not a problem the flow of the river is controlled by a reservoir 10 miles up the river, snow the main road is cleared by the state a private contractor clears the estate and looks after the gardens this is part of the service contract.”

“That sounds good. What about Schools? My husband’s two kids are at a boarding school upstate, he wants them home.” Linnet Larson told Adrian rather unconvincingly.

“There is the valley park school it has a good school environment and has good academic achievement record I will arrange a meeting with the principle what time would be good for you. You don’t have Children yourself?”

“No why would I want to be stretched by his brat, I have better things to do with my body than have 9 months of hell then 18 years of bitching, I want I want. Sorry let me have the details it will be fine as long as I don’t see the spoilt little brats during the day. He can make the arrangements for a change.”

“Can I leave you hear for a while I have a couple next door.”

“Sure I will come around to get you when I have a good look around.”

“Thank you, I will let them know you are going to introduce yourself.” And he walked off towards the front door.” Linnet eyed him up as he walked away and then found the kitchen and she thought to herself this is ok all mod cons what about upstairs.
She walked around and then up the stairs finding the bathroom and then two connecting bedrooms, then a guest room with a on sweat shower and the master bedroom with walk in wardrobe and Jacuzzi bath and shower room his and hers sinks and vanity’s opening the window of the bedroom she notice the view was straight into the next doors master bedroom where Adrian was talking to her new neighbours.

“Things are looking up she looks very comforting.” She said to herself.

 

[Un-registered]

JUST MESSING WITH YOU A LITTLE

Any time, lovely lady. Any time.

 

[Guest]

Love the AV. It's bit eyes only spooky.

My eyes are scary?

 

[pointless]

all eyes are scary when they stare at you without blinking.

when i was a kid, i used to cover up pictures when i was left alone. felt like i was being watched all the time.

acute paranoid schizophrenia and bipolar disorder run in the family.

 

[Screaming Grace]

My eyes are scary?

No sweetness, it a TV show Dark Angel set in Seattle in the future there is a character who dose this video stream called Eyes Only your eyes are very alluring.

Grace

 

[Un-registered]

acute paranoid schizophrenia ... run in the family.

Interesting. How is this manifested. I have come across chronic paranoid schtzophrenia, but never acute.