Hot Mean Ex-Girlfriend Humiliates A Husband's Current Wife Then Takes Him From Her

[TreeHugger829]

I really love the stories written by TheTalkMan and other authors like him and his stories center around a nice handsome husband being seduced by a super hot but evil woman who humiliates the wife, whose ugly, before stealing her husband, and I have an idea for a story like that. The husband already has a child with his ex-girlfriend. He also already has a child with his current wife. He regularly visits his other child like a normal good father. During their past interactions, the ex-girlfriend is always nasty to the wife and even beat her up multiple times, the husband never let this stop his interaction with the ex-girlfriend since he has a child with her. His ex-girlfriend gets kicked out of her house or something makes her have to leave her house for a short time and the husband invites her and ofcourse their child, to come and live with him and his wife. The wife is short, fat and ugly, and the ex-girlfriend is tall and hot. From there, the ex-girlfriend seduces him and humiliates the current wife, also giving her own child favoritism over the wife's child by doing stuff like letting her own kid change the channel and watch what he wants right in the middle of the wife's child watching something. This is all done right in front of the wife who won't do anything. Also she bullies the wife with her size, as I said, the wife is short and fat and the ex-girlfriend is tall. And anything else you humiliating (hopefully with spitting in the wife's face, beating her up/slapping her and making her kiss her feet or ass) she does to the wife before the ex-girlfriend eventually successfully seduces the husband and makes him put his wife out on the street, or the husband and ex-girlfriend turn the wife into their maid. Can any writer who likes this idea, write it?

 

[sirhugs]

I'd prefer the version where the ex-gf takes the Wife from the husband...

 

[Texguy84]

If the new wife is short fat and ugly, it raises serious questions as to why the husband married her. You could always go for the wife being attractive, but maybe not as "porn star hot" or whatever as the ex.

 

[TreeHugger829]

If the new wife is short fat and ugly, it raises serious questions as to why the husband married her.

Because he's a nice guy and the wife has a great personality (even though the ex-girlfriend is going to show him he's not really a nice guy when she gets him to cheat on his wife with her just because of how hot she is). But the wife's not hideous ugly, just plain faced.

 

[sassysasha89]

I really love the stories written by TheTalkMan and other authors like him and his stories center around a nice handsome husband being seduced by a super hot but evil woman who humiliates the wife, whose ugly, before stealing her husband, and I have an idea for a story like that. The husband already has a child with his ex-girlfriend. He also already has a child with his current wife. He regularly visits his other child like a normal good father. During their past interactions, the ex-girlfriend is always nasty to the wife and even beat her up multiple times, the husband never let this stop his interaction with the ex-girlfriend since he has a child with her. His ex-girlfriend gets kicked out of her house or something makes her have to leave her house for a short time and the husband invites her and ofcourse their child, to come and live with him and his wife. The wife is short, fat and ugly, and the ex-girlfriend is tall and hot. From there, the ex-girlfriend seduces him and humiliates the current wife, also giving her own child favoritism over the wife's child by doing stuff like letting her own kid change the channel and watch what he wants right in the middle of the wife's child watching something. This is all done right in front of the wife who won't do anything. Also she bullies the wife with her size, as I said, the wife is short and fat and the ex-girlfriend is tall. And anything else you humiliating (hopefully with spitting in the wife's face, beating her up/slapping her and making her kiss her feet or ass) she does to the wife before the ex-girlfriend eventually successfully seduces the husband and makes him put his wife out on the street, or the husband and ex-girlfriend turn the wife into their maid. Can any writer who likes this idea, write it?

Needs some polishing in some areas like perhaps the husband has the mother send his child over to him or she drops the child off so the women won't have to interact with each other mostly for his wife but also for his peace of mind and the kids. He could talk to his ex but hasn't met with her in a while so he hasn't really seen her for some time. Also the wife is ugly, just not up to the exes' level of beauty and hotness.

But try PMing this to TheTalkMan and sees what he thinks or go for it.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Never PM ideas, always just post them here. The more people you have working on the problem the better off you're going to be by a long shot.

As for the wife I think it's a bad idea to make her ugly, I think we need to have some reason that the wife and the ex come into contact with each other. I mean the Ex is clearly the villian of this peace and we don't have any reason for the actions. Does the ex do this just cus she can? Is she really that big a bitch?

 

[TreeHugger829]

Never PM ideas, always just post them here. The more people you have working on the problem the better off you're going to be by a long shot.

As for the wife I think it's a bad idea to make her ugly, I think we need to have some reason that the wife and the ex come into contact with each other. I mean the Ex is clearly the villian of this peace and we don't have any reason for the actions. Does the ex do this just cus she can? Is she really that big a bitch?

She dislikes the wife because she's living with the father of her child, even though it was the ex-girlfriend who broke up with the husband, also she doesn't think she deserves him because he's so attractive and the wife is ugly. And so she bullies the wife because she can.

 

[TreeHugger829]

Needs some polishing in some areas like perhaps the husband has the mother send his child over to him or she drops the child off so the women won't have to interact with each other mostly for his wife but also for his peace of mind and the kids.

Good idea. Or the husband just drives to the ex-girlfriends house whenever he wants to visit his child instead of allowing the ex to come over his house, also since the ex-girlfriend won't let the husband take her child back to his place without her seeing the child off, which the husband won't let her do now, it makes the husband have to sometimes spend the night over the ex's house when he wants to spend days with the child. This makes his current jealous since it's the ex-girlfriend's fault with her bullying that this all had to happen and yet it lets the ex-girlfriend spend even more time with the husband and makes the wife get less time with him.

 

[Sean Renaud]

She dislikes the wife because she's living with the father of her child, even though it was the ex-girlfriend who broke up with the husband, also she doesn't think she deserves him because he's so attractive and the wife is ugly. And so she bullies the wife because she can.

See that makes the wife the victim and somewhere you have to do something bad to the ex.

 

[TreeHugger829]

See that makes the wife the victim and somewhere you have to do something bad to the ex.

It's not that kind of story, the ex doesn't get any come uppings and she eventually steals the husband from the wife who never did anything wrong.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Prepare for the haters then.