HOT Deleted Scenes from your favorite movies. Feedback???

[ZIP CODE]

Hello.

This is a repost because I didn't have a catchy enough subject line to draw people in.

I started posting stories about a month ago. My series is based on Deleted Scenes in Movies that should have been, or at least what I would like them to be.

I wasn't getting enough feedback and was wanting more opinions on how I was doing.

So please give me feedback.

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I could never be a woman, because I would just stay home and play with my breasts all day. STEVE MARTIN - L.A. STORY

 

[Spinaroonie]

When are you planning to FIRST POST them?

 

[ZIP CODE]

dunno what FIRST POST means

Don't know what FIRST POST is??????

 

[damppanties]

Cutting room floor: Face/Off Ch. 1

Hi ZIP CODE

I read this story of yours long back and liked it. I saw your request for feedback here and went back and re-read it. Well, all I can say is that the second time was good too. Keep writing. I'm off to read the second part...

-DP.