Hostages, not Non-Consent

[Rainbow Skin]

Taking hostages is an obvious idea for a story here: you can force them to do anyhting you fancy. But I don't much like Non-Consent in any form, and couldn't work out a way of doing it decently.

Having all the customers in the bank strip naked could provide some voyeurism.

Then I thought what if the gang of bank robbers have accomplices planted in the queues. They order that young man over there to perform an act upon this young woman over here.

Yes, but while he's enjoying what he signed up for, she's still being violated.

So finally I decided it had to be exhibitionist: all the customers forced to do disgusting things are actually in with the gang.

Then I decided I was sick of the idea and wouldn't be doing it, so you may have it free.

 

[sirhugs]

another variation would be the stockholm Syndrome, where over time the hostages sympathize with the robbers. Gradually, they sneak into basements, corners, offices, for sex
Finale is an orgy.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

yeah, this Stockholm Syndrome is a well known thing.

Another version could be:

Some years ago, I found this story on the Internet: A family was held captive by 3 guys. The 3 guys looked at the family and talked about how they would rape the 14 year old daughter (yeah, I know that this is too young for Lit).

When the mother heard that, she sacrificed herself: She told the 3 guys that they should fuck/rape her, instead of her daughter. So the 3 guys fucked the mother .... however, after her, they also raped the daughter.

So, this could be another thing about the hostages. One of them sacrifices herself, to improve the situation. I guess you could call that "non-consent", even though the woman said: "take me, instead of her"

 

[snooper]

... I guess you could call that "non-consent", even though the woman said: "take me, instead of her"

Yes. Consent under duress is not consent. It becomes clearer if the threat is a bullet in the woman's head if she doesn't perform. That is clearly rape. If the bullet threat is in the daughter's head that is also rape. So a penis in the vagina is not likely to be as fatal as a bullet in the head, but it is the same principle.

 

[sirhugs]

how about one of the robbers is the younger brother of another, coerced into this. He's a virgin...perhaps about to die...the hostage takes pity on him.

 

[openthighs_sarah]

A possibility...

Two bank hostages, both women, who have been friends for years. One is a little bit mousy, afraid of many things, always worried. The other is fearless.

They're not forced to do things to each other, although perhaps one of the bad guys (the crazier, blindingly stupid one) starts to demand just this kind of thing -- only to be slapped down by his boss, who may have developed a kind of respect for the two women, especially the bolder one.

So... what if the two girls end up being guarded by the crazy bad guy, and they see that they can use his fantasies as a way of escaping? The fear is still there, and fear is powerful. They're angry, too, and that's powerful. When they start to touch and explore each other, it's not about degradation, although it might seem that way at first. It would have to develop into something more complex -- both characters have to change, they have to find something unexpected within themselves, and so... maybe... the theme becomes liberation. (Why has the one character always been afraid? And if she can get through this, how could her life not be completely changed?)

I can see them together, their bodies entwined, their faces shocked and desperate and afraid and (just maybe) genuinely loving. Find the right point of view, and you can play with the combinations -- how much of it is real, how much is an act for their captor? Fear pushes them together, and courage -- and a willingness to drop their defenses -- sets them free.

Maybe the captor sets down his gun once he realizes/thinks it's not an act. He moves closer... gets a little greedy... Dead villain.

I don't know if it would work, but I like the combination of liberation, revenge, and sex.

 

[sirhugs]

Re: A possibility...

Two bank hostages, both women, who have been friends for years. One is a little bit mousy, afraid of many things, always worried. The other is fearless.

They're not forced to do things to each other, although perhaps one of the bad guys (the crazier, blindingly stupid one) starts to demand just this kind of thing -- only to be slapped down by his boss, who may have developed a kind of respect for the two women, especially the bolder one.

So... what if the two girls end up being guarded by the crazy bad guy, and they see that they can use his fantasies as a way of escaping? The fear is still there, and fear is powerful. They're angry, too, and that's powerful. When they start to touch and explore each other, it's not about degradation, although it might seem that way at first. It would have to develop into something more complex -- both characters have to change, they have to find something unexpected within themselves, and so... maybe... the theme becomes liberation. (Why has the one character always been afraid? And if she can get through this, how could her life not be completely changed?)

I can see them together, their bodies entwined, their faces shocked and desperate and afraid and (just maybe) genuinely loving. Find the right point of view, and you can play with the combinations -- how much of it is real, how much is an act for their captor? Fear pushes them together, and courage -- and a willingness to drop their defenses -- sets them free.

Maybe the captor sets down his gun once he realizes/thinks it's not an act. He moves closer... gets a little greedy... Dead villain.

I don't know if it would work, but I like the combination of liberation, revenge, and sex.

I like this version a lot...it crackles
please write it

 

[openthighs_sarah]

Re: Re: A possibility...

I like this version a lot...it crackles
please write it

Are you kidding? I write the simple stuff: girl meets boy, girl fucks boy, girl fucks girl, girl apologizes to girl for not introducing herself first, etc.

I was just throwing the idea out there.