robertreams
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Today I received an "anonymouse" comment on one of my stories posted here in 2009. In fact, the second erotic story I ever wrote. I will admit I did not give the proofreading and editing the attention I should have. At the time I thought I was merely playing around with some writing on a porn site. Now I try to edit thoroughly and ask others to help edit my work.
So anyway I will admit to some errors, mostly punctuation around quotes and maybe too many commas.
But seriously, this comment said I should be ashamed to call myself a former English teacher and no wonder our kids today can't read and write when so-called English teachers write so "horribly".
Please resist the temptation to strike at my vulnerable underbelly and answer my question sincerely.
Horribly written? Really?
By the way it is an m2m story so be forewarned
So anyway I will admit to some errors, mostly punctuation around quotes and maybe too many commas.
But seriously, this comment said I should be ashamed to call myself a former English teacher and no wonder our kids today can't read and write when so-called English teachers write so "horribly".
Please resist the temptation to strike at my vulnerable underbelly and answer my question sincerely.
Horribly written? Really?
By the way it is an m2m story so be forewarned
